I often wonder

Just a short write talking about what many of us think about at times when we get to know someone online here.

I often wonder

What would it would be like?  To see you.
I mean, to REALLY see you.

Is your hair the same shade? Are you as pretty?
Is your smile as sweet as my imagination says it is?

I often wonder

What would it would be like?   To hear your voice.
Does your voice sound like music?
Do you laugh like an angel?
Will you whisper when you want my undivided attention?

I often wonder

What would it would be like?    To hold you close.
Will your touch give me energy?
Will you feel as warm and as perfect as my heart says?
Will you make me feel whole?

I often wonder

What would it would be like? To taste your sweetness.
Will your lips give off warmth and electricity?
Will your body respond to mine?
Will we make each other happy?

I often wonder.....

Author's Note

This one took me only about 5 minutes to write...so i was not looking for anything deep with this one.......let me know if you can relate to what i have written here though.

Reviews

[twain]

Absolutely all the time, I'm new here on WC, but elsewhere I always have. You'd be surprised the kind of person I take you for and the kind of people I imagine others to be like. I'd hate to meet anyone from here and find out they fell short of expectation. But I think the magic is always in the mystery. :) But that aside, this is very good for 5 minutes. :)

[Steve]

Thank you for your kind review.....

[c.m.]

I often wonder as well......I can relate for sure, though I wish I couldn't on so many levels. Whether you were looking for anything deep or not, it is deep. Five minute writes can be some of the best because that's when it's from your heart, and your head hasn't had the time to screw with it. This is stunningly beautiful.

I often wonder....

What would it would be like? To hear your voice.
Does your voice sound like music?
Do you laugh like an angel surely would?
Will you whisper when you want my undivided attention?

This is my favorite stanza, because I love voices. I think they are some of the greatest things God gave us. I adored this poem, it is absolutely wonderful. Great piece.

[Jillian Alexis]

lovely write. i think many ppl can relate to this as we often build someone up in our imagination, cant help but wonder if they are really as great as we seem to think.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what sweet honeysuckle musings~ a tender poetic gently drawn down the page like a embrace~