I often wonder

Just a short write talking about what many of us think about at times when we get to know someone online here.

I often wonder

What would it would be like?  To see you.
I mean, to REALLY see you.

Is your hair the same shade? Are you as pretty?
Is your smile as sweet as my imagination says it is?

I often wonder

What would it would be like?   To hear your voice.
Does your voice sound like music?
Do you laugh like an angel?
Will you whisper when you want my undivided attention?

I often wonder

What would it would be like?    To hold you close.
Will your touch give me energy?
Will you feel as warm and as perfect as my heart says?
Will you make me feel whole?

I often wonder

What would it would be like? To taste your sweetness.
Will your lips give off warmth and electricity?
Will your body respond to mine?
Will we make each other happy?

I often wonder.....

Author's Note

This one took me only about 5 minutes to write...so i was not looking for anything deep with this one.......let me know if you can relate to what i have written here though.

Reviews

[twain]

Absolutely all the time, I'm new here on WC, but elsewhere I always have. You'd be surprised the kind of person I take you for and the kind of people I imagine others to be like. I'd hate to meet anyone from here and find out they fell short of expectation. But I think the magic is always in the mystery. :) But that aside, this is very good for 5 minutes. :)

[Steve]

Thank you for your kind review.....

[EmpressPoetess]

Hmmmm, yes I can relate. I'm sure many of us can, wondering what if!

[nono]

This is spot on again! People put on shows for people they call their friends and then turn around and talk about them. I like this and your talented don't let no one tell you different!

its really nice. it flows well to

[Carlie]

Sometimes our quick writing is some of the best as it is our most truthful writing at times, left un-hindered by endless editing that sometimes takes away the emotion of a poem.
I love that so many of your poem ask questions and create thoughts in the minds of a reader that I think we all experience at one point or another.

[Liza]

this is a sweet sense of wonder
my poems usually take me 5 minutes too so you need not to explain yourself
let your emotions move you and inspire u

[Joseph - Michael]

You've described the whole concepts in very well detailed on how everybody would be wondering about meeting people in person after knowing them online for a while or so...

My advice to the ones that are wondering; Do not expect anything at all...

Overall, it's pretty good and how true people can be pondering like that...

[Marie Harrison]

This was a very touching write. Sometimes the quick write ones are the best. It's funny people always sound much different than I imagine they would. Your poem is very sweet.

[TamiViolet]

I can relate to this, but keep my interests toward those I meet face to face although I must say that I have established some wonderful friendships here on the cafe....

But it's all about the writing...yes?

[Color Me Gone]

I think this reads like a very sweet love letter to someone. I uite like it.