I often wonder

I often wonder

A Poem by Steve
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Just a short write talking about what many of us think about at times when we get to know someone online here.

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I often wonder

What would it would be like?  To see you.
I mean, to REALLY see you.

Is your hair the same shade? Are you as pretty?
Is your smile as sweet as my imagination says it is?

I often wonder

What would it would be like?   To hear your voice.
Does your voice sound like music?
Do you laugh like an angel?
Will you whisper when you want my undivided attention?

I often wonder


What would it would be like?    To hold you close.
Will your touch give me energy?
Will you feel as warm and as perfect as my heart says?
Will you make me feel whole?

I often wonder

What would it would be like? To taste your sweetness.
Will your lips give off warmth and electricity?
Will your body respond to mine?
Will we make each other happy?

I often wonder.....

© 2013 Steve


Author's Note

Steve
This one took me only about 5 minutes to write...so i was not looking for anything deep with this one.......let me know if you can relate to what i have written here though.

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Absolutely all the time, I'm new here on WC, but elsewhere I always have. You'd be surprised the kind of person I take you for and the kind of people I imagine others to be like. I'd hate to meet anyone from here and find out they fell short of expectation. But I think the magic is always in the mystery. :) But that aside, this is very good for 5 minutes. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steve

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review.....



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I wonder or i often wonder concept played a great role in your poem. The poem written only to clear the concept of I Wonder or Why I Do Wonder. Imaginary's good, I Enjoyed the poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Steve

11 Years Ago

:0). Thank you.
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I am sure many can relate...I can :) x

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Steve

11 Years Ago

You are so kind. :0)
A clear pic. of the pic. made in my mind when reading this nice piece. Brilliant work, you gotta keep write and post. Well penned, last stanza's filled with the passion i must say.
Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steve

11 Years Ago

You are too kind! thank you.
Absolutely all the time, I'm new here on WC, but elsewhere I always have. You'd be surprised the kind of person I take you for and the kind of people I imagine others to be like. I'd hate to meet anyone from here and find out they fell short of expectation. But I think the magic is always in the mystery. :) But that aside, this is very good for 5 minutes. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steve

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review.....
I can relate.
You have assembled questions of life.
Concerns,worries,fancies and wondering all come as the online relationship begins and progresses over time.
Thanks for sharing a nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can definitely relate to this. I've had a friend now for 16 years that I met over the internet. Still to this day, he is my best friend. We've never gotten into one clashing of words, not one... Although he's like a big brother and it's not a romantic thing, you still do wonder exactly who's hiding behind the words you see. A picture can be fake, a voice could be lying, and then even with video chat these days... you still don't really know. Could it be the love of your life, a friend, or a monster? But I have never regretted my decision to find out.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steve

11 Years Ago

It's intriguing isn't it? I agree. I've done
It and I didn't regret it. :0)
yep!! I think anyone online can, some in a romantic way and others in a friendship way. The connection on these type of sites can be MAGIC and sometimes FRIGHT!!.. You have to be careful you never know who is luring behind the screen, on the other hand something wonderful could be waiting.. :-).. *again stay true to your work, I am really enjoying it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steve

11 Years Ago

I like your insight. Thank you .
I often wonder who is on the other end, I often wonder if I can learn to drive in this dang snow so I will know who I am talking to ,I often wonder many things, but then I confront them you will never know with just wondering as a close friend*)find out
thank you much for sharing this is a very adorable piece of writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think our imagination has its own idea of what people look like and sound like when we can't see them in front of us. Inflections are different, faces are different, weight is different.... Think about a radio personality. When you actually see them they are totally the opposite to what you thought. I've seen people from the net in pictures after I'd known them for a time and they looked much different than I imagined. I guess there is nothing wrong with it though. Imagination and fantasies are fine with me. Good poem.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful and poignant poem. The What if and If onlys have got everyone at some point I think. There's a brilliant flow to this and it's very direct, well done again.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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