Music

music
rushes in
through my ears
and dances
through my head
bouncing off the walls
of my skull
it sinks into
my blood stream
and pumps its
rhythm through me
synchronizing with
my heartbeat
involuntary my bones
move
my body finds
it's way into
the melody
becoming the song

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Music is the universal language, a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

[Samith Pich]

haha i liked it! it was simple and yet melodic - u said only what needed to be said. i found the image of your bones moving involuntarily amusing and vivid.

i would challenge you to tighten it even more, discard the last peices of fat still clinging and reveal a lean mean poem about u and music

[An owl on the moon]

Amazingly vivid
surrounding us with ribbons
music comes alive through your voice
the image of the tune
the power of song
is brilliant...

[Tanner]

I like the description and the quick rhythm of this...although I wish it were longer so I could read more of it.
Excellent!

[Nicholas Hallows]

You definitely capture the rush and energy of music here; bouncing off the walls of your skull.

I like the idea of becoming part of the song.

Nice.

NH

[Joseph - Michael]

This is well detailed piece you've written there. I am hearing impaired, yet I still can appreciate the music anyway...

On the other hand, it's all still good tho, so no worries...

[Broken.]

I like the simplicity in your words.

A great description of how so many feel.

Great write.

[A.r. Bazian]

very nice poem!
you've got your way with words!
this poem is alive! i can feel it!
insatiable!
erm... something tells me you're a rocker?
r you not?

never the less
keep this up!
tc

[Phil Konsor]

This is a nice poem. I think it's true, when people Listen to the music, it leaves you nothing but wanting more. You know what im saying?

[Eric Lee]

really like this one!