How To Make A Fake

I wrote this 8/5/2008, the title pretty much says it all...

Tons of Expressions with false Emotion
Bits of Charisma and Smiles
Don't forget Politeness hidden with Snide Comments,
Handshakes with Hate
Two to one ratio on Water to Love,
Friends who are all Enemies,
A Pinch of Pride
A Dash of Secrecy
Mix is all together now
Don't forget the liquid body too
Don't mix too much or too little
And Bake it, don't Fry it,
There is tons of ways to do it
But now you now my way on,
How to make a Fake.

Reviews

[Scyoni]

This is an interesting work. I've never seen a free-verse written that way, but I suppose personally I don't read much free-verse poetry. The lines match up together and fit with this rather unique theme...

Good work, I hope to see more like this from you in the future. ^^ Welcome to Writer's Cafe, too, by the way.

[Ritsuka A.]

Very blatant and raw expression. You present the message directly and to the point without flourishing it with ornate descriptions and other such literary tools. Truth be told I think that the sheer simplicity makes it more interesting, it works nicely for you.

Also,O.o [I am not sure if you realised] the bluntness of your style is like a perfect contrast to your topic. It makes for a very interesting technique.

Unfortunately I agree with you....we do reside in a world of phonies who put for sunny smiles to conceal ulterior motives. wwwwww I sound like Holden Caulfield from "Catcher in the Rye"~

[Wicahpi]

An interesting style of writing. Your message is conveyed clearly.
We definately live in a world of "fake".

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