The dark paradise

His heretic lips twisted into a lunatic smile as he watched me through the walls, resistless and worthless, squirming away from the madness. The submission of my sanity left my unspeakable soul wrecked, leaving my shattered body on the ground, helpless and hopeless in this unblessed paradise. His mighty hand traced my reflection, he couldn't touch a living soul so he took my reflection to his bottomless den. We were lost in the madness, turning everything upside down, he was lost in his own hell, watching the untouchable angel from far. I’ am the demented, I forgot how to live as my breathless lungs screamed for a breathe and my beatless heart cried to beat again, and before I realize he captured my dying soul, forcing me to succumb to the righteous side of his unblessed paradise, feeding on my hope to live, he shed off my reason to live, perhaps he has another reason to give me, our souls collided as we were in his dark heaven, giving each other a way to breathe. 

Author's Note

hello again ^^, I hope you like it.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

What incredible writing.. is like a nightmare being tasted, savoured then... thought about for a second,, here.. and there.

Your words tumble out of breath, our phrasing seems to gasp.. I almost hear the screasm of denial and fear and yet.. the final subission... groaning and moaning. Wild words,, Kira.

[Kira]

thank you, everytime I write it seems my feelings come as a fantasy so in the end I write something like this.

[emmajoy]

That's fine, writers have to find their own style and place when they put thoughts to paper or wherever.

[Kira]

yeah :) thanks