Spoken Word :Anger

I realized today that What anger really was and how it controlled my everyday life soo...I had to speak on it.

You controlled my life

But I couldnt see it in plain sight

Had a few wake up calls

But I didnt notice until I lost it all

Strength, happiness, determination

Were all gone I was caught is your resurrection

But yet you always stayed

Hidden but there you layed

Deep deep inside me

Those calls could never revive me

Because I was too deep

What you sow is what you reep

But you kept me

In tight, firm grips

You took control over my lips

And what you thought I said

My mind couldnt possess the thought of you hurting me

But little did I realize you were me

The bits and pieces that were left of me

And there you stayed with me

Devoted and only working with me

Changing my life

Leaving me alone

By myself? To kope or to what be your only hope?

Because without me you have no fire

No one to feed into your desire

You desire to curse scream and kill

But you cannot do this things

without someone in your reigns

I broke the cycle

left you all alone to be recycled

Because I cant continue this game anymore

I had to check you out at the door

Cause you see

You werent me

Me and You werent meant to be

So I leave you

Sorry but I have to say goodbye to you

Author's Note

Tell me what you think Losl. it was my first spoken word ever written. Usually its like a freestyle thing and I never record anything but I just really had this like attitude check and realized I had to express my feelings in some way. And There came This! So yeah P:

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

This is a very good write, NEB...I mean technically, it certainly needs some polishing (which I sometimes do 20-30 years later), but I always try to make my poetry better...some cadence issues and some necessary punctuation to emphasize points...but all n all it was an emotional, heartfelt, very well penned prose.
I have two similar in theme "The Games we Play"" and "on My Knees" and even My soul Do Take"...actually several...after all it is a common theme....an Excellent 1st poem...you should be proud.
allen

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

full of emotion good imagery