Simplistic Tempests

I love the rain... Why am I a terrible person?

I’m sorry

At least that’s what I’ll say

Because I’m really good at falling in love with storm clouds

And I have this lack of understanding of

The biology of a rainy Tempest

That isn’t

But then again

                                Is

 

My body

 

I find myself falling in love

At night time to much

Walking down warm sidewalks

In the evening rain storms

That I wish would stay

                           All

                           Day

 

I don’t have very many scars

The ones I do have are simplistic

And the stories behind them are bland

And I may have these deep blue eyes

Where once upon a time encased in amber

Well you’d think they are telling you stories that only

Someone with my

                                Skyward eyes

Could tell you

 

It’s a lie

 

I’m not this story book ending

Of happily ever after

                                F**k that.

           Never

 

I’m

Just some empty lover

Who’s never even

Kissed someone

                                In the rain

Author's Note

everything here is intentional.

Reviews

[Rocans]

Stumbled across this penning. Glad I did for I had fun reading it...something about the perky voice of the persona grabbed me. I like how you use the analogy of a tempest to your body...your use of 'biology' there is at best...curious and made me interpret your words in a particular light that I'm not sure if you meant to be viewed in that way. Good write.

[Invisible]

there are definitely parts of this I really like.

[kera moondust]

oh?

[Invisible]

I like being mysterious sometimes, leaves intrigue doesn't it?

[17thWhitePrince]

Really beautifully written !!!
The poem flows and is easily followed and understood
It leads itself to a honest revelation about oneself
"I'm
Just some empty lover
Who's never even
Kissed someone
In the rain"

[kera moondust]

=) I'm glad you think so, I do so love the rainy weather that inspired this piece of writing.

[17thWhitePrince]

Definately =D