Coffee

Coffee

A Poem by Mackenzie Knitter
"

my struggle with isolating myself from those who are just trying to support me. it's like i'm consciously trying to sabotage myself, but i promise I'm not.

"
"This is a new place, a fresh start."
She whispered to herself.
She had everything she'd ever wanted,
Even her own coffee shelf.
"I don't even like coffee that much."
She cried into her pillow,
But he does.

© 2018 Mackenzie Knitter


Author's Note

Mackenzie Knitter
Why can I only write when I'm sad?

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Sadness is the strongest emotion for art. I even examine that in my poem "Sad Writes Strongest" (you can give it a read at your leisure).

Now, this piece.....it's def something. You've spun a yarn worth a thousand words in less than 50, and that's brilliant. A world of meaning and interpretation, and the emotion grips and stabs with a wonderfully intriguing ending. Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mackenzie Knitter

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much! that means alot!
emipoemi

4 Years Ago

my pleasure.



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Old souvenirs of something lost will make us sad. When I was young. To escape, I would the state or the country. I am too old to run now and I do understand the poetry Mackenzie. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sadness is the strongest emotion for art. I even examine that in my poem "Sad Writes Strongest" (you can give it a read at your leisure).

Now, this piece.....it's def something. You've spun a yarn worth a thousand words in less than 50, and that's brilliant. A world of meaning and interpretation, and the emotion grips and stabs with a wonderfully intriguing ending. Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mackenzie Knitter

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much! that means alot!
emipoemi

4 Years Ago

my pleasure.
It lets it out.
I think we are made to 'let out' in one way or another.
Perhaps when the pain lessens you'll feel more up for some of that support.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mackenzie Knitter

6 Years Ago

I hope so, thanks for your comment :)

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Added on July 24, 2018
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Mackenzie Knitter
Mackenzie Knitter

Burnaby, BRITISH COLUMBIA, Canada



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