10 Seconds of Lust

Description of true lust, in my experience ;P

One 

His eyes lock onto mine, capturing them in his icy intensity.

Two

His pupils dilate as his gaze travels hungrily over my body.

"I am being hunted" I think dizzily, my breath catching in my throat.

Three

My heart pounds in my chest, as I bite my lip, wishing it was his.

Four

He prowls towards me softly... and like lightning, he pounces and his hands are on me.

Five 

My face flushes red as I feel his body against me, my chest contracts as I gasp for air.

"I am being hunted" I think again, submitting to his strong hands as they trail over my curves, finding hold at my hips.

Six

My head falls back as his lips trail up my neck, soft and hot.

Seven 

His hands slide up my body and make me shiver, I am unable to control my ragged breaths as he kisses along my jaw.

Eight

He cradles my face in his warm hands, his eyes burning with desire.

Nine

His hand slides into my hair and pulls me towards him, our eyes closed and mouths yearning.

Ten

We ignite, sending sparks in every direction; illuminating skin, flesh and bone.

I engulf him into myself, fusing us together.

He, the hunter has become the prey as I consume his lust and breathe fire,

Scorching his lips, my lips, we are white hot desire.

Burning at a heat that combats the earth's core, and in this moment, 

We are,

Eternal.

Author's Note

Tried to get a little more in touch with my sexuality, in my writing at least haha

Reviews

[Babe Roxx]

Hey, Mac...one word, WOW...just awesome way you expressed your emotions...beautifully stated. :)

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Thanks so much!!

[Babe Roxx]

You are very welcome, Mac. :)

[Relic]

I envy your descriptions here. I can feel the warmth and passion in each line a the heat rises.

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Thank you :)

[matrixmark]

Felt like a firecraker just waiting to go off. The build up was ace and the explosive end was pretty darn intense.

Mark.

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Thank you

[matrixmark]

Welcome.

Mark.

[*]

Like a firebrand that burns your desires within, this spells lust in every crevice of the word.

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Thank you :3

[forgotten_ghosts]

Very passionate. I kind of like the idea of numbering the different steps. You perfectly managed to let the tension and lust rising until the end. Great job!

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Thanks so much! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing epic journey in your words. I liked the drive and the energy of the words. Good to know lust, fire and a eternal place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Thank you so much :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[JMaster1]

You did it right , very good passion

[Mackenzie Knitter]

Thanks :P