Perfect Place

There's a perfect place in this world,
and it belongs to one single girl.
She's told me about it and I've even seen it from afar.
but for each attempt to reach it, I bear a scar.
It sounds like a great place to be.
But she'll never take me.

Reviews

[Ripple of Aqua]

Sweet and teasing, there is a great bit of anticipation about hearing about this place, and yet its out of reach. I liked it. Even since you did it in so many words!