The Deep End

Lost love

Swallowed whole and spit up, fooled by love. Bitterness burns my throat. Up.UP.UP Higher, drunker. Make the pain go away. Everything I need located in the bottom of a bottle. Shoving thoughts to the back of my brain, trying to forget, but failing. Learning to live with the never ending pain. Cut deep in flesh to feel again, pools of blood on the floor. Lost in a daze, feeling a tingle of my soul. Fall.Fall.Fall None of this is real, I say to myself. Just a nightmare. But it is real and I can't wake up.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think, if you like or not.

Reviews

[Insomnia Chick]

It deems dark yet true. I have drank so much in my life and nothing helped me with the pain I was feeling. This was great writing and I loved it.

[Kennedie]

Thanks :)

[marie]

i like it. in the sense that it is true.

[rnuff]

i have had dreams where I can't wake up, when i do i am still am in the dream.
a relatable read.