Musica

Being with you

was like coming

suddenly to the sea

being confronted 

by the illiteracy

of a language

I'd thought I'd mastered

It turns out I'm

really an idiot

savant

Chauncey Gardiner

happy constructor of

tidy little noun castles

splashing adjectives

skipping adverbs

some might call poems

Ken e Bujold

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

Perhaps you just need to Be(ing) There. Gardens grow best when the season is right. Peter is the Seller of that admonition-but you knew that. I always get a kick out of the characters you use in your poems. Makes for an interesting puzzle.

Winston

[Ken e Bujold]

yes, hidden bits among the obvious is always a fun bit of writing for me, though hopefully it is not just us old farts who get the inside joke

[Lorry]

Iz skipping adverbs like when you skip the adverts on YouTube?
I have a feeling I used to know what they is, but my head gets hurty just thinking about it 😊

[softlyfall]

I happen to reside in a happy little noun castle, quite happily tending my garden. Not a spoken word is needed but every one of them is welcome. Come to tea in my garden, Mr Savant, and you will see that life is a state of mind

[John the Baptist]

I wonder how many readers will wonder who Chauncey Gardiner was. Peter Sellers said that was the role with which he most identified. Chauncey did have his limitations. On the other hand, he could walk on water.

[duff]

The impressions made on us. Everyday one us of the fool.

[willweb]

There's nothing like "Being There" This was really expressive Ken. I think I know this feeling, at least the idiot part. They can certainly do that to us.

[Ken e Bujold]

they do indeed Will. In fact she just did it to me again. Just finished watching the video she made for my 60th birthday and it far far surpasses the poems i write for her

[Chris]

Interesting thoughts and personal observations.

[Ken e Bujold]

yes she certainly is one for keeping interest in my thoughts :)

[Red Brick Keshner]

There are persons who have that effect on us. And it isn't always a situation we can get out of! Every time I see Peter Sellers face the Pink Panther theme plays in the back of my head.
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[Ken e Bujold]

could be worse Fred, could be every time you see a pink panther you start dreamily thinking of peter sellers :)

[Red Brick Keshner]

bahaha! don't wish it on me man!