The Human Condition, separate entities with the need and capacity to fuse as one, if only for moments,
which live in memory as one.
A moving piece, Ken!
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
thanks JD. all seven for and because of one outstanding woman
When it becomes personal for you is when you are at your poetic zenith, such as with this wonderful addition to your library. Splendid, mate.
Winston
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
thanks Winston. Yes when it becomes personal the urge for metaphorical wizardry subjects itself to c.. read morethanks Winston. Yes when it becomes personal the urge for metaphorical wizardry subjects itself to clarity of emotion. this is to be center of Musica's book, though i am considering just how to place it. have a thought of breaking it into blocks, as though 7 chapter headings? still mulling it over, have another 10 days before the printer
Love expressed somatically
the marrow of self's own selfishness to own some other self, the transfusion of want for want, a convergence of senses, breathing in union
That is love that surpasses the limitations of mind, cannot be explained but only expressed...but need not be expressed from flame to flame because you know one another so well.
Just achingly beautiful. A knight and his maiden
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
thanks amy. she is a maiden, me a Knight? well i do love my nights so maybe
You are quickly becoming one of my favorites on here my friend. This was outstanding. Its form made it exciting to read, laced with little cliffhangers and falling into one at the end. Really nicely done. q
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
thank you will, the accolades are quite humbling. Glad you enjoyed the work.
seven poems seven days, one woman. This one just makes it in under the wire, as I putting last touch.. read moreseven poems seven days, one woman. This one just makes it in under the wire, as I putting last touches on her book before the printers
2 Years Ago
Well done you. I have to say Ken I am a tad envious at how prolific you are with your writing. My mu.. read moreWell done you. I have to say Ken I am a tad envious at how prolific you are with your writing. My muse needs a good kick up the backside. Such a lazy moo she can be. :)
2 Years Ago
for me its the process. what people see as prolific is a slow process in reality. I break my writing.. read morefor me its the process. what people see as prolific is a slow process in reality. I break my writing day up into blocks. warm up exercises, then multiple pieces in early forms, long lines of thoughts. then a few pieces in mid completion, maybe only one or two three lines added, then the end of day of pulling together what is essentially done but needs the final revisions. While many pop up around the same time to be posted their fermentation can be anywhere from a few days to weeks, sometimes even months. It's a process I developed in my advertising days and works for me.
AS FOR U MY LADY yes give that muse a push, I am a big fan of your work, hungry for some new ones
A fine expressive piece on love and its coalescing actions towards a unified soul. To know one another beyond intimacy and in an existential manner. Where one feels they are breathing for the other. A fine poem Ken.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
thanks CLE, made easier when you have one that inspires the words
i like the "trippy" psychedelic imagery here. this poem took me on a ride in a theme park called "love" where one may experience strange visions, feelings, and be grateful while it lasts, but also be grateful when it ends.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
seven poems written over seven days for my wife, which I suppose can be viewed as a rather "trippy" .. read moreseven poems written over seven days for my wife, which I suppose can be viewed as a rather "trippy" psychedelic ride, one I am certainly grateful for