A Budding Romance

I know my eyes

have designs

on the mailbox.

My feet feel

the tingle of

a rendezvous

some time later

this afternoon.

Ken e Bujold

© 2022

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

When it comes to favours of the heart ….one has to be bold….if one wants to give ‘a budding romance’ a chance ….right?

YB

[Ken e Bujold]

true. or at my age, someone to talk to
:)))

[Yellow Butterfly]

……………….. :)

[JD Major]

You nailed it with "tingle!"
JD

[Ken e Bujold]

such a fun word: tingle

[W. Barrett Munn]

Carly Simon sang this song and called it Anticipaion; you, on the other hand, did not have music and melody to supplement your meanings. You win for poetry; Carly for song.

Winston

[Ken e Bujold]

and for brevity. Took you 30 seconds to read what you would have had to listen to for 3 and a half minutes :)

[W. Barrett Munn]

Damn fine point! you get the edge, 2-1.

w.

[Betty Hermelee]

getting ready for a a romantic date.... this short poem brings to life the anxiety one may feel as it leads up to the real meeting.... excitement; nicely written.
Best, B

[Ken e Bujold]

or the dull ache of waiting for confirmation one is still here breathing :)

[Betty Hermelee]

YES, that too!!! You're quite welcome!
Best, Betty