Beautiful Psycho

Loss, Hurt, Pain, Guilt, Life

From the deepest

hell that lives 

inside me, 

I screamed.  

Pure hatred spewed, 

as I 

wretched 

and 

wilted 

onto the bathroom floor 

into deep, 

inconsolable 

sobs. 

Reviews

[Teresa Elde]

It is very interesting however some of the depth is missing for me. The words are beautiful though and I think it's a fantastic way of putting it.

[kumars]

nice write. you loved to write good poem but words are too heavy here.