Storm Clouds

"Her eyes were like storm clouds, fog rolling in on a blue horizon; and when I looked in them it was like I was right in the eye of it and I could feel my own storm rising within me, like a bolt of lightning to my core."

Reviews

[Dev_mccabe]

Wow. I could feel him as he’s staring into her soul.

[Everett DeValle]

My gosh, it's like hit that head rushes to my brain...just lovely poetry in vignettes. A lovely read.

[Relic]

I wrote one about a storm too. I like this and the way it makes you think. Anger can build up in much the same way and sometimes its only a matter of time before it lets loose.

[Bare trees]

An admirable poem for sure.

[Adam Adams]

Beautiful way to shape the words; praising someone's beauty / glamour with much compassion. Nice imagery.