Break these chains

just something that really represents who i am

everyone is alive, but not everyone lives

some people drift through life

working to please people

who just put you down, or expect to much

these people worry about the consequences

every moment of the day

people like this worry to much

about what other people think, or what they said

these people are not alone

people like this are people like me

we are to young to worry like this but we do

together lets break out of these chains

they are starained, just a bit more

and we can break free and be alive

 

Author's Note

hay, please let me know what u think :D i would like come criticism please!!

Reviews

[Kelso]

can someone PLEASE review this poem?? i want to know where i can do better!!