Mother Nature’s Destiny

On this now windy autumn night
The trees are wild, awoken
The sky is clear and stars shine bright
Destiny has broken
 
A winter breeze has appeared now
Not like you remember
The green grass is grazed by a cow
Even in December

Everyone waiting for the snow
But none is to be seen
Sat patiently at their window
Thinking where is the winter scene
 
With six months past has nothing changed?
The cold breeze now feels warm
Are the seasons truly arranged
Please tell me, where was the snow storm?

Hibernation is no longer
The flowers start to bloom
Winter was weak, spring was stronger
Destiny resume

Author's Note

This is one of the first ballads I wrote. Please tell me what you think and any improvements you think should be made.

Reviews

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

I really like your ballad Kelsey. From idea to creating pictures in mind, you've done a great job on every aspect of the poem. Keep writing!