Dear Kelly, I was so glad to read your work this morning. Strong flow of thoughts lead to the proper ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
at the height of Blinding sight...the rhyme is right.
this poem sings....in first stanza should be "its"---
spirits soar when we feel perfection, but we need to give ourselves a break and feel perfection in imperfection, for that is the perfection of what life is.
j.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Lol....yes you right about it's but you got the meaning....yes you are right about perfect in imperf.. read moreLol....yes you right about it's but you got the meaning....yes you are right about perfect in imperfection...hope u are well🌹🌹