‘Your Lies’

Do you choose to live or die?🌹

‘Your Lies’

Don’t

Wonder why
When
Things
They die

They
Cheat

They
Steal

Don’t
Question
Why

It’s
All
Because
You told
Those
Lies

To lie
You might
As well

Cheat
And
Kill

And
Never
Pay
Attention
To ever
Doing

Why

For
You see
Within
A lie

All things
Die

It’s rotten
Fruit
With
No
Reason
Why

Now
Tell
Me

Why

Would
You
Choose
To
Lie

It
Steals
Kills
And
Slowly

Kills
Everything
Inside

Then
Don’t
Wonder
Why
When
You
Lie

You
Slowly
Die
A bit
More

As
Each
And
Every
Day

Passes
By.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
28/11/20

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem conveys the incredulous feeling I just felt a few days ago when someone explained to me why he was blowing me off . . . I didn't care too much that he was blowing me off, but he was so dishonest with himself about his reasons. We can never be good writers until we learn to be utterly honest with ourselves. For people in the habit of being honest, your poem shows that incredulous feeling we get when other people are not interested in following the same ground rules! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Amen to that the truth will set you free and those who are free are free indeed🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"tell me lies, tell me sweet little lies, tell me tell me lies"
"oh no you can't disguise"

so true and the lies will come back to haunt us...to destroy us...truth may be difficult at the time, but will feel much better later.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And that dearest Sir was and is still one of my favourite songs...truth be told...thankyou🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime lies are easier than the truth. We forget who we were. Hello dear Kelly. So glad to read your words again. I hope you are doing well. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote