‘Heavens Gate’

All within the Devine...🌹

HEAVENS GATE:

The time we spend inside our minds
The searching thoughts we try to find
Where do these go- do we ever know

These thoughts they twist and they turn
Within sub conscience lie and burn
What is it that the heart must learn

The fears and tears of life so true
Is all a journey left to you
But yet at times it all just seems
To be a part of an unending dream

Through torrents of torment and
Stormy seas- its all achievable
Upon our knees- the inner turmoil
Put to rest when your vision is
Clearer after each test- so lift
Your eyes up to the skies

Where mercy and grace complete
This race- its not about the date
Or place but the pursuing of
A sacred place standing in front
Of heavens gate....

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is a beauty here... in the mercy... in the grace... and such pain in the storms... in the torments... it is just like life... dark and light... reaching for the heavens.... What a wonder of words, dear poet.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou...always light through the dark ...joy comes in the morning..bunches of blessings for you🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You must seek peace, to find peace dear Kelly. Some people are dancers on the storm. Heaven gates, maybe? Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

The peace is in the centre of the storm where few dare to go....one day hopefully we will know ...🌹🌹🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

well put ... taking it to home dahlink! holding it fast today! sound wisdom .. love the questioning .. where oh where does our conscious "self" reside ?????????????????? :)
E.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thanking you kindly 🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

life is a series of tests...and i believe Hell is here on earth...if we can somehow get through it with fly colors...or even just survive...
I think if there is a Heaven....Peter will stamp our hands when we get to the front of the line, and let us in.
a very positive write...a nice one to read this early afternoon.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou...we can only wait and see and yes in amongst much beauty is a living hell...thankyou🌹