‘I Waited...’

Nothing can change the hands of fate- no time place or date..🌹

‘I Waited...’

I waited long
I waited late
For
The sake
Of my hearts
Fate-

I wondered if you
Would call
Or did you feel
You would fall
Into a place
And lose the race
The race of love
Unknown and out
Of proportion
Blown

I waited
My heart
Anticipated
For you to call
To come visit

That knocking sound
Upon my door
Upon the floor
I lay
Waiting
For that day
Come what may-

The music played
The fire it burnt
And on and on
My heart yearnt
For your love
To call on mine

I wasted time
Wishing your heart
Would be mine
Was it a matter
Of time-

I watched the clock

Imagined you there
So close and near
But what did your
Heart fear of being
So near
And alas i didn’t
Hear the sound
Of your voice-

I wasn’t your choice

No knock at the door
Like there had been
Before

I waited long
I waited late

I wondered why
We contemplate
Without a date
Its never too late

Give into the hands
Of fate
Where there’ll
Be no
Heartache...🌹

Reviews

[Chris]

I always wonder how so many seem to find each other when so many, many more obviously don't. Sigh, this is a real voice... heard.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes we can only wonder...i wish i had an answer- but i think truth out of mystery is more exciting...one day...🌹

[lightsong]

I love reading You in the mornings because Your pen has smooth clarity that flows gently into the mind giving it a certain ease, though You speak of real events, but it was also the waiting for his "heart" to wake up, for "his" spirit to feel, and as I was reading Your words suddenly "Roxette - Spending My Time" came to my mind, and now watching the song, I can see the same scene through Your poem. how hard and painful it is to be absolutely sure of something deep in Your inner and the other person doesn't recognize it? You try, then You utter known knowing it's they who should feel it or not, at last came Your superb verse,

"Give into the hands
Of fate
Where there’ll
Be no
Heartache..."

how meaningfully beautiful is that... just let it be, embrace Your fate, don't think so much and flow with it.

Good Morning Angel Kelly ✨🌸🌹🌸✨

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh dear you do bring tears to my eyes you special child of God- u just know and understand and in that echo the comfort can be found- sometimes its than vaste space of not knowing that gives us peace- knowing all at correct time- sending much love and blessings for a special day where new doors open and favour upon your life is in abundance🌹

[lightsong]

I'm humbled by Your words my special Kelly, and may peace finds its way so soon to Your whole being, You are a beautiful and one of a kind person, Love to You sent in abundance 💖

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And a thousand fold in abundance and favour returned to you- gently , softly and lovingly x🌹

[Kent Rawski]

Realistic poem. you stepped up he stepped out. seems something hung him up. Always nagging thoughts of why and what if. Good way you conveyed your feelings on paper but left wondering if he had the same information in person and it might be his reluctance for a completely different reason as I have been on that side of the fence nice poetry

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Well as sad as it may be if you cannot be honest about your feelings to yourself and others you could miss out on the best thing ever- can take a horse to water but cant make it drink🌹

[Suhd]

The music it creates and the way it tastes, wonderful. It is prepared with so much love with a dash of yearning and melancholy. Bravo

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thanking you kindly🌹

[Onlyme]

A very emotional ride into your powerful, heartfelt read of a poem. Very relatable, thoughtful and so sincere.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou dearest i appreciate your visit🌹

[Tony]

Very relatable write on multiple levels. I mean, basically the all the stanzas are something we all can relate to at sometime or another.
I really felt the passion and the sincerity of your words. Thank you for sharing them here

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Always a pleasure and thankyou for your passion to take part in reading- greatly appreciated🌹

[Tony]

It's all good. I dig your work!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Alls well that ends well...🌹

[Neville]

whoever it might have been, was a fool .... and as far as fate is concerned, you are write.. of course.. a bit o poetry enjoyed.. N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So kind of you dear sir- people only appreciate things sometimes when they no longer are- hoping u r welll🌹

[Neville]

bless you, I am fine.. x

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

To fall into the hands of love. A rare paradise.
"Give into the hands
Of fate
Where there’ll
Be no
Heartache."
Sweet love, kind love, needed love. Where are you? Heartache, can mean we are still alive dear Kelly.
Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh then we must be very much alive and kicking after all the heartaches and pains of life but like everything what will be will be and when it comes it wi remain at right time place- dance Coyote in amongst the heartache and pains🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

He is and he had accepted and you are right dear Kelly.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Traci]

Another great write! This one really tugs at the heartstrings. As we wait in eager anticipation of what could be, moments pass us by. Sad reality, people never oftentimes know what they have until its gone.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes - they awake to late- i just cannot understand what makes them blind to what lies infront of them- maybe fear- all shall be well🌹

[KCthelastboyscout]

If You Love Somebody Set Them Free
a great modern day philosopher said that.
Written with heartache and pain.such a sorrowful poem

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Not really- sometimes we set ourselves a goal a time period-to wait watch see- the truth always reveals itself for the best- thankyou for popping in🌹