‘Chance At A Glance’

Chances of whats meant to be- to set you free- glimpses of a lovers dance’🌹

‘Chance At A Glance’

If i took the chance
Would it be love
At first glance -

Would you fall for me
As if set out in history

Would it be love
At first sight
Heart flutters wings
A flight

Oh if i took a glance
To take a chance

Would you lead the dance
Would it just be me
Would your heart be free
To dance
The chance
Of love-

Oh if i took the chance
Would it be love at
First glance

Would you take
A chance on me
To reset whats
Written in history

Or would it be a mystery

That missing link

Would you take a glance
Of what could be
To rearrange
Eternity...

Kelly Fagelund Gjersoe
14/1/19

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

like the forces on the waters love does do a lot of pulling together ..at least we want to believe it eh!? (and i do) but it is risky business and only the beginning of the game ... a bit of fencing perhaps as we teeter between all in and mistrust ;) what an adventure in life .. who knows when such a power may flow over us ..so enjoyed reading and all the inspiration your love poem brought me this morning .. thinking back, thinking now and thinking ahead ????????? ;) even in my old man skins :))
E.
ps. i see you have signed your poem with Kelly! nice to meet you Kelly .. top o' the mahrnin' to ya!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Nice to meet tou and its a pleasure- Kellys bern the signature since the beginning - maybe only mystically appeared now?? We need to be open to all forces - but of pulling pushing never did no harm...glad itsgot your mind going- wishing you a wonderful day - thankyou🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

yes..mystical appearances do occur ;)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[emmajoy]

'Would you take - A chance on me - To reset whats - Written in history - - - Or would it be a mystery - -
That missing link '

Read that three times, smiling each time!

This appears to be a simple song, poem - maybe a path with distinct start and finish! Although it has specific meter i find an underlying need to be somewhere special with someone special, by any means. BUT, are you trying to appear nonchalant?! Eternity is a heck of a long time.. fifity years would be 'luverly' however! Thanks you so much for sharing - would love to know how your journey goes. :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So nice of you to stop by- greatly appreciate- its a never ending journey, full of chances changes and whats meant to be’s...hope all is well🌹

[emmajoy]

Been naughty recently, cramming things in when i should have been repaying kind reviews.. so, only too pleased to visit you. :) All's well, thank you.. truly hope the same for you.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Alls well thankyou- just taking it one day at a time thats all we can do 🌹

[emmajoy]

More than true.. :)

[Stephany]

Hopeful and wistful at the same time. Life is like this more than we acknowledge.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou gor stopping by i appreciate it- we can only hope🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is chance and wonder.
"Would you take a glance
Of what could be
To rearrange
Eternity.."
Few are brave enough to attempt eternity. We accept less and forget who we were. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Chances we need to take to see places we might mever know-🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Kelly.

[Neville]

I like the repetition threaded throughout... reminds me of a glance over the shoulder and a beckoning smile...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Ha ha ha - man of many words...,🌹

[Neville]

tis what we do.... :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

He who laughs last...,,