‘Target In Sight’

Set your sight and let your heart take flight🌹

‘Target In Sight’

If
I could

I would

If it
Was meant
To
Be-

The perfect
Unity

2 hearts
Perfectly
Free

To be
You
And
Me

Us

What does
That mean

Something
Thats seen
In distant
Dreams-

Two opposing
Tides
No need
To hide-

The arrows
Released

The target
In sight

In the midst
Of flight
In search
Of what’s
Right

Hold on
Tight

Currents
Churning

Temperatures
Burning

Fire
Ice

Twice
Or
Thrice.....🌹

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
13/1/19

Reviews

[Kent Rawski]

Pure and unrefined this love you have for someone in mind there could be quite a jolt if you two are struck by a lightning bolt I like the things you see you hope to be

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou if we dont have hope we have nothing🌹

[Kent Rawski]

Pure and unrefined this love you have for someone in mind there could be quite a jolt if you two are struck by a lightning bolt I like the things you see you hope to be

[Neville]

That's one hell of a ride, in a smooothe kinda way... gonna bring me surf board next time round here :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Hope it can withstand all the different currents, temperatures and seasons.....🌹

[Neville]

sometimes ya just got to dive in and see for ya self... N:)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌈🌈🌈🌹

[Neville]

............... N:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such flow....you are so good at that with your line breaks...toward the end of the poem, i was humming the ELO song, "Hold on Tight to your dreams"---
I reread this one twice, or maybe it was thrice.

j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh you are so very kind i do appreciate it- wishing u a warm werkend🌹

[lightsong]

If we, no matter what have decided to make Love our target, then Love must work and fix everything, this what I get, see and feel within Your words 💞

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Love can overcome all and true love can heal a broken heart- for those of us that know and search for it- blessings special soul🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Tempting and wonderful words shared dear Kelly. Some fire can expand. Even ice cannot withstand great heat. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Balance of forces opposites attract - thanking you 🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kelly.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Chris]

We often want what we had til we let go... because it wasn't what we wanted now.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

But why didnt you or dont you want it now- thats where i see the balance needs to be balanced so we see only one unity- until we are totally free i dont think one can see??? Nice to see you here🌹

[Chris]

Good question to ask over a Diner's table - when you're sharing a 2 or 3 A.M. "pause"

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol...and the confusion??? Like to see the faces🌹

[Chris]

I don't believe there would be any "confusion" at all... at THAT time you're sharing "self" and realness.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes then all shall be uplifting and wisdom amongst the learned- id love to be thete to share🌹

[Onlyme]

Wonderful poem Kelly, nice hypnotic, rhythmical tempo, to tease and please and reel you in to the fate and karma of love.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Hmmmm that fate...that karma..,wish it would hurry up lol- but only the best truest purest for me...not fussy sm i lol- thankyou 🌹

[Onlyme]

They say what is for you willn't go past you.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I know- im waiting im waiting ....🌹

[Onlyme]

Kelly relationships are not all the be all and end all of everything. You can be with someone and It can be hard work. So remember that too. As you have to work at it. Like everything else.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes i agree and i know but i do believe when two souls are meant to be things eill be easier as theyll understand one another and not do what upsets or harms other...what will be will be 🌹

[Onlyme]

True kelly. Life is a strange old nut. In general.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

All shall be well🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

love the closing ..gives me a bit of a chuckle ..twice or thrice indeed ;) i so enjoy your unique style in form and tempo ...it is amazing how one little "-" can create such a pause and creative tension ... i am in love with love once again now Thoughts ... thanks to your poem

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol you make me smile- glad u got those words- i choose thrice in more than one context ...im glad you are inlove with love inlove is the only way - to love is one thing but to be inlove is the ultimate freedom - thankyou for your joyful visit hope all is well🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

same to you Thoughts! i can feel the connection :))))

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹