down to here:
"It’s not for the only
It’s all
Or simply
None- " I was involved ..paying close attention .. after that i think the use of second person begins to lend to a feel of "preachy" and more of an indictment to me the reader .. but that is its risk eh!? I like the theme and the direction to wise living ... its takes a bit of that to come to the conclusion that things never happen just for one's own sake .. but for many ... love that my friend .. your closing lift me up and encourages me to begin this new day ... with a fresh and better attitude .. thanks for sharing Thoughts in Time ;)
E.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Pleasure is mine and thankyou for ur thoughts- much appreciated🌹
This is a very true heartfelt poignant poem Kelly. That speaks volumes. As, we do live in a self-centred world of late. Where the majority of people just care about themselves and to me that is very sad. We should all love they neighbour, and care about each other and how compassion, love and understanding towards each other. It cost nothing at all. To be nice and caring. Your poem. Shows what a loving heart can do. Nice one Kelly.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thankyou again- yes it is a shame how humans have become- but lets hope they too see the light befor.. read moreThankyou again- yes it is a shame how humans have become- but lets hope they too see the light before its too late- blessings🌹
The world seems such a frenetic place these days and I guess we all get caught up in our litte, self centred bubble, this at the cost of empathy, caring, thoughtfulness. I've been living in a small close for nigh on 15 years and know very little of folk that love two doors away.
Good morning.
Good morning to you and your words are true but you dont have to know neighbours to be kind or to of.. read moreGood morning to you and your words are true but you dont have to know neighbours to be kind or to offer a helping hand, to greet offer a smile or kind word- i keep very much to myself but i am kind and will always help where i can 🌹
6 Years Ago
May I point you in the direction of " Long after", a recent post that sums up the best in humankind... read moreMay I point you in the direction of " Long after", a recent post that sums up the best in humankind.
Thank you.
I loved this poem! So inspirational, so positive and so wise. It is all about loving and helping out our brothers and sisters in this world. That is the most powerful thing we can do! Thank you for sharing! I really enjoyed this poem!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Im so glad it touched your heart- may you go out and touch others hearts- wishing you much happiness.. read moreIm so glad it touched your heart- may you go out and touch others hearts- wishing you much happiness love and all things hoid for new year and always🌹
We've had a sip of tomorrow
a thin slice of the "new".
"It's grey, cold, bleak, and angry..."
yet street corners here have emptied -
and our "crumbs" helped too.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Wonderful as always- i do hope all is well with you - wishing u much blessing love and joy🌹
Ahhhh, I think John Lennon himself would smile at your lovely, hopeful, inspirational poem Kelly! Great movement, flow, musicality and message. I gladly sing along. Hapoy, Healthy New Year wished to you my friend.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Oh thankyou for your time and kindness i appreciate it- people need to think before they do then hop.. read moreOh thankyou for your time and kindness i appreciate it- people need to think before they do then hopefully the witld will improve we can only hope and pray- blessings for you🌹
Hello Kelly, a Happy New Year to you. I really enjoyed the sentiment in this lovely poem it demonstrates to me what a kind and caring person you are. We should always look out for those who are vulnerable. None of us can change the world, but each one of us can make this place a little bit better.
All good wishes for 2019
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thankyou for the kind words- it came to me while lying in bath last night about reflecting on the pa.. read moreThankyou for the kind words- it came to me while lying in bath last night about reflecting on the past what have we done not just about the future for in the present change is made- wishing you many blessings and all things good for 2019🌹
6 Years Ago
Thank you Kelly. A relaxing bath a good place to get some inspiration :)
Happy New Year dear Kelly. I wish you happiness and great success in 2019. A wonderful poem.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thankyou/ my wish for all to love deeper and care and share more for and with others- it starts with.. read moreThankyou/ my wish for all to love deeper and care and share more for and with others- it starts with the man in the mirror🌹
6 Years Ago
You are right dear Kelly. The man looking back making faces. Hard to face the truth. You are welcome.. read moreYou are right dear Kelly. The man looking back making faces. Hard to face the truth. You are welcome dear Poet.