What a beautiful way to encapsulate change. Nothing stays the same, all things pass. Only love remains. Your imagery and references to nature Kelly are wonderfully refreshing. I love this poem.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thankyou once again for your love and kindness- love overcomes all🌹
Perhaps things should alter, especially with love, caring - sharing. It helps to adjust what's wrong or add what matters. Tis adding that sincere extra something.. indefinitely, endlessly - never matter the counting of days but the depth of how.. Perhaps?
Your words run away with themselves and yet by the end of your poem, you 've found what matters.. love is all that remains..
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
It certainly does- no matter what- wishing you all the love happiness and joy today and always 🌹
another beautiful touching song Your heart sings before us, a song of life, a song of love, Love that stays ever the same, no matter what, always Your serenity calms us with warmth, and I felt You there in Your solitude, with the raising of Your senses and emotions, no need for anything or anyone, just as beautiful as You can be...
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Ahh Thankyou for your loving kindness and your beautiful heart- sometimes this realisation is the be.. read moreAhh Thankyou for your loving kindness and your beautiful heart- sometimes this realisation is the best thing to have peace with because that is all we have when love given is not received or returned- but love is live no matter when in true form and maybe somehow somewhere we can try find comfort in that no matter where we find ourselves- I guess it is so that giving is more than getting- expecting less but helping others to know the truth- lonely at times but comforting in some way 🌹
Exquisite drippings of stanzas - tap tapping on the reader's soul to stir emotions and ponderance! Nothing remains the same; but that is the way our individuality grows and creativity springs (feed constantly with love). Sensitive and very enjoyable read … :-)
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thankyou for your kindness and so glad you enjoyed- yes love feeds all and that’s all hopefully on.. read moreThankyou for your kindness and so glad you enjoyed- yes love feeds all and that’s all hopefully one seeks to be is an expression of complete love🌹
even sitting here in my little computer room ...and taking thought of how the changes are so lightning ..continuous ...dust i can't see is moving in the air ...bugs are scurrying from here to there ..my body tempo ...all changing without realization ..its quite overwhelming isn't it?! .. this one gets a little long and repetitive for me ... i think the theme is strong and a good one .. i like the change in rhythm as (for me) it starts to read a little like a rap ... you put me in the moment Kelly!
E.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I’m glad it got you tapping along sorry it went on too much but Thankyou for taking time to read- .. read moreI’m glad it got you tapping along sorry it went on too much but Thankyou for taking time to read- change is something we can be quite certain of- enjoy ur evening🌹