‘Fly Free To Be Me’🌹

Freedom of spiritual self- worth and wealth🌹

‘Fly Free To Be Me’

If only

I

Could fly-

From this

World

I would die

Away from all
The lies

Across the miles
There
To where

The world

Smiles-

Removed from
The
‘Files’
Of the unsatisfied
Sighs-

Me ur my’s

Where do they fly

Up above
In the sky-

Out of the
Mind

Where the thoughts
Rewind
Where actions
Are kind

Renewed
And
Unsigned

Full of nursery
Rhymes

No

Stop signs

No

Mimicking
And
Mimes-

Jump

Off the merry-go-round

Can you hear the sound?

It messes with
The mind-
The shrieks
The cries

All the lonely
Lives-

Moving matrix

All elastic

Stretched out of shape

All so fake

One big mistake

Shake
It off

Spread those
Wings

Hear the melody
The wind
Sings

Up above
In the sky

Where I’ll fly
To be free

To be
Me...🌹

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
5 August 2018

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Interesting word association and use of word play in this brain dump of a poem which drags the reader down the page like falling into a sinkhole. Food for thought.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for taking time🌹

[Patricia Wedel]

Kelly dear... your thoughts remind me of when my daughter was three... and we rode on a merry-go-round to catch the golden Ring. Each horse was hand carved and had a sweet smile.... Tomorrow... we’ll go to the Fair and feel the breeze in our hair. The sun will come out tomorrow. hugs, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

What a beautiful review like always- warms my heart and makes me feel so much better being sick in bed- thankyou for sharing and never change the beautiful heart you are x🌹

[wordman]

it would be nice if we could rise above life and be free.
but most are bound for one reason or another

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes the money the materialism etc - sad - we need to look at what’s really important- when we die we can’t take anything🌹

[wordman]

you are a down to earth girl

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I am you are right - what you see is what you get - no shades of grey- black or white🌹

[wordman]

just red pajamas

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol - with polka dots🌹

[wordman]

happy valentines

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And thanking u🌹

[wordman]

and you`re welcome

[Sneh]

Often times we push ourselves back and ignore our so called desires. This leads to the formation of unreality, worst.
Terrific write..Rhymes at their best :)
Sneh

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for reading i do appreciate- wise words🌹

[Sneh]

Always welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Kelly.
"Spread those
Wings
Hear the melody
The wind
Sings"
Sometimes. We must open our eyes, our heart and our mind to grasp the beautiful things. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad you enjoyed it- let those who have eyes see and those who have ears hear- freedom of heart and spirit- Thankyou for stopping by🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I did dear Kelly and you are welcome.

[Onlyme]

Hypnotic and rhythmical poem of sheer delight. That sends you to heaven and back again. Makes your heart skip a beat.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

How kind are your words- thankyou🌹

[barleygirl]

As a rhyme-aholic myself, I love your use of rhyme and near-rhyme done in an unstructured way to resemble a musical rapping message (for lack of a better way to describe it!) I love that your rhymes do not feel like they are stretched, but instead well-considered. As an old person with limited possibilities now, I find that I don't even miss the rat-race anymore & my imagination often inhabits the sky when I'm writing about things so far from this chaotic society of humans. That's why I really relate to the "sky" motif of your imagination here. Your sky meanderings are very different from my own, but we're definitely on the same wavelength, when it comes to wanting to leave this messed-up world sometimes! You nailed it perfectly! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes the sky’s the limit- up up and away- glad you found common ground in the words- take care- Thankyou for stopping by 🌹

[Neville]

There can be no better feeling.... thank you for the read....... Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Glad you stopped by - Thankyou 🌹

[Neville]

pleasure and true....

[Sami Khalil]

"Spread those
Wings

Hear the melody
The wind
Sings

Up above
In the sky

Where I’ll fly
To be free

To be
Me...🌹"

Free spirits do fly, free hearts do love and free imaginations do soar. You are soaring high and above in poetry now.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Wish I could fly up there spirit free and not return - to find that spirit inzinc with mine- for that special everlasting place in time- Thankyou 🌹

[Sami Khalil]

Me too. You are welcome.

[midniterider]

if only we could fly,what an experience

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Hmmmm - spirit is always free to fly- we hold ourselves back 🌹

[midniterider]

and i guess your right

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Freedom is right - love takes flight 🌹

[midniterider]

free to love

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

EVERGREEN and forever 🌹

[midniterider]

that was always my thoughts forever in love,learning new things about your mate every day,life evergreen which is one of my favorite songs by roy orbison

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Hmmm I know - my favourite as well- beautifully sung in A Star is Born- my most loved film- special beyond words🌹never dying always new 🌹

[midniterider]

so i guess i`ll have to sing it for you

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’d never say no- special debut???