‘Sweetness’

Pure inner sweetness - be true to oneself🌹

‘Sweetness’

Oh sweet soul

Only you know

Where it is

That you should go

Nobody else doth know

Where love lying deep

Not like a sheep

The wretched world

Doth keep

Your spirit searching deep

Oh keep it pure

Don’t let the emptiness

Your heart it lure

Remain the pure

Diamond embossed

Beauty unlost

No matter the cost

Oh love of Devine

No place or no time

Remove from the mind

You the giver of mine

Oh love so Devine

Spirit and heartbeat

Entwine

Sweetness and seduction

Of time

Soul yearning

Desire burning

Sweetness of spirit

Of mine

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
28 May 2018

Reviews

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Your writing is sweetness itself. It's a very beautiful poem!👏 Good job!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your kind words I appreciate it 🌹

[barleygirl]

This is an alluring message that reminds me to NOT be so jaded (as I am from years of hurts) . . . & to keep sweetness as a goal when imagining the possibilities! There is an unmistakable appeal to sweetness, as it conjures up a childlike innocence & gentle acceptance. Usually I’m critical of using a well-worn word like “sweetness” but you’ve done it in a way that’s packed with originality. Your rhymes are uninhibited & satisfying (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

There’s a time and a place for everything as well as a reason and a season- glad if it’s helped in any way- fond regards being sent your way, topped with many sweet blessings🌹Thankyou yet again🌹

[Ranger Kessel]

such a spirited rhythm. A mark of a great poet. Solid content here. Thanks for sharing this!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your ever so kind words- really appreciated🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words sweet and hopeful.
"Oh love so Devine
Spirit and heartbeat
Entwine"
I love the above lines. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Heartbeat must be in spirit and in truth- Thankyou for your time and appreciation-🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work dear Kelly and you are welcome.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[wordman]

if we just could keep it untouched by life,stay sweet forever

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

We have a choice to how life touches us and we respond...I believe all are sweet at core🌹Thankyou for stopping by🌹

[wordman]

my pleasure

[emmajoy]

Seems to be a drift of words, searching for and finding anwers maybe unexpected because questions hadn't been asked?! There's always a place where self is hidden and the gift shared of sharing the same, honestly, sincerely.. is precious. It flies.. always looking for that place.. said to exist, often elusive.. Maybe looking for Self first is.. the first clue. Perhaps?

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So true- without knowing self and loving self we cannot know or love another- Thankyou for taking sweet time🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Owl said it perfectly...a tender, flowing rhythm...
a long sigh..
beautiful poem with such feeling...that contrast of sweetness and seduction combined for the other to be mine and i hers...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Wonderful words of yours- glad you enjoyed the flow- thanking you sweetly🌹

[An owl on the moon]

Your words have such a tender, flowing rhythm to them, like music awakening in a sigh. Such confessions of loving, of the self, of the life within. Beautifully expressed, and so lifting to the soul, dear poet.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for gracing my page with your beautiful words- Within is where we find all that without cannot supply- appreciation on your visit- thanking you dearly🌹

[An owl on the moon]

Yes, so true. The worlds within you keep pouring wonder into this outer world of silence and shadow.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Words of knowing and wisdom- what’s felt within cannot always be explained without🌹

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful words and may your gentle spirit forever be rinsed in sweetness and all that is good. Listen to the whisper of your soul and stay tuned to all that is you. Lovely writing.

Chris

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh special are you and Thankyou for you and your kindness- yes listening to our internal voice and flying free on spirit is the best way to be - spirit sets you fee- may you be blessed with love goodness and much joy🌹

[Chris Shaw]

And you also, always

[.]

Yes, our soul is the true essence of our being and the person we are, and it is so susceptible to manipulation by others and the experiences of the outside world. Staying true to self regardless of our trials is the foundation of a strong and confident life. For if we give up our sense of self, we give up all that we are and all that we ever intended to be.

Small note....'divine'. Another fine piece of writing in your gently flowing style. Nicely written.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

How wonderful to have you grace my page- feels like forever that I haven’t seen you - Thankyou for your time and always deep honest and open spirit in response- only goodness being sent your way - trust all is well🌹

[.]

Forever is roughly two months....haha. Sometimes time and words are just in short supply. Always a pleasure to read your work. I hope you are well, too.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Alls well Thankyou - I appreciate your appreciation🌹