‘Sacred Space’

We search we find - that space in time🌹

‘Sacred Space’

The time we spend inside our minds
The searching thoughts we try to find
Where do these go- do we ever know

These thoughts they twist and they turn
Within sub conscience lie and burn
What is it that the heart must learn

The fears and tears of life so true
Is all a journey left to you
But yet at times it all just seems
To be a part of an unending dream

Through torrents of torment and
Stormy seas- its all achievable
Upon our knees- the inner turmoil
Put to rest when your vision is
Clearer after each test- so lift
Your eyes up to the skies

Where mercy and grace complete
This race- its not about the date
Or place but the pursuing of
A sacred place standing in front
Of heavens gate....

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' This race- its not about the date ~ Or place but the pursuing of ~ A sacred place.. '

Writing out like this, the above, seems to either bewilder or clarify harboured thoughts. Guess it's the way we see things: through the half empty/half full glass - as to how we achieve an end.. if it's ever possible. Perhaps? Finding a peaceful place - a personal calmness, is surely viable with patience.. and yes, first find the patience. Your writing's gentle and pertinent.. has a light inside it that seems to glow and grow line by line.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou - your kind words showing the beauty of your soul- yes in the silence many a answer is found not in going around and around- trust all is well in your side and your brother- much blessings and all good things 🌹

[emmajoy]

More than welcome, tis more than writing is, sincerity. No further news from Italy but tomorrow hopefully, Bless you for adding your
kindness. - tis immensely kind of your. (You)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Blessings and prayers sent your way🌹

[Neville]

A beautiful poem full of questions and yearning....my guess is, we are all searching for a special place and sacred space...... the trick is, to keep searching.......... Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Mmmmm I agree keep searching- waiting in patience as well for the correct things to come along- might be a long wait??? Thankyou for your kind words🌹

[Neville]

All good things come to those that wait... just you wait and see......... Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Amen to that- I wait upon the correct time and place- Thankyou for you kind heart🌹

[Neville]

my pleasure entirely....

[Phill Oz O'fee]

An imaginative and charismatic read! Could I ask - were you influenced by the ideas and thoughts of the artist/sculptor Antonius Roberts’ Sacred Space? Just his sort of visual interpretation his work reflects, on the subject matter you have so poetically captured!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for stopping by- no not at all, all my own thoughts and imagination and life’s learnings put into poem- it’s always out of my learnings in life’s journeys and findings- to be quite honest you might think me stupid I don’t even think I know who that is who you talking about ? I appreciate your time🌹