‘Free’

In cutting ties you set yourself free🌹

‘Free’

I set
You free

From you
And me

To be
The best
That you
Can be.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
1 May 2018

Reviews

[Nicole]

Short and sweet, but it says a lot. Leaves it open for the reader's interpretation. Was this a toxic relationship, or did one party just want more and they couldn't achieve it if they settled down? Nice work.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Not even a relationship a spiritual connection- sometimes we need to accept some things cannot bevat present and may never be so best way it to cut any spiritual ties and go on..Thankyou for your time I appreciate it🌹

[Leo]

Short and sweet..yet original and selfless..
Feel free to review my poems why not u might like one or two..blessings

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou- will do🌹

[Fish]

I love this piece, I think it was really power full and emphasizes the word free, it made me think about the stereotypical if you love something set it free phrase and that being said it almost seems like the way you write this you can inturprite it in different ways its almost like this is subjective and its a really nice piece, I also love how you kept each lines maximum of 2 words and it makes the peom feel really deep and powerfull like eatch word has its own special meaning

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your deep insight and thoughts- I appreciate your time🌹

[R.E. Ray]

Truth in a few short words. "Freeing" someone is also freedom for us, when we're shackled to each other. Brevity is the truest art.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your wise words- I appreciate you stopping by🌹

[mou]

yes sometimes letting go is the best decision than holding an unreached dream..first, it will make us cry but then it will be proved as the best cleanser of heart..beautiful!
mou.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou- yes wisdom at its best- y waste time anyway on things that just might never be- life’s too short if you have live for someone and they cannot decide then they need to be set free- time waits for nobody- thankyiu🌹

[mou]

really true words of yours

[Neville]

I sense this is not only true, but very real.... reminds me of something I once penned long ago when I thought I was a hippy... freedom eh' can't even give it away these days..... N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol- funny thing is people are only as feee as they want to be- stupid remains stupid- Time is short life goes on- thankyou❤️

[Neville]

a philosopher as well as a poet then...have a good un.. N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Welll it’s not just a pretty face u know lol- gotta go deeper no time to waste- have a good one the sun is shining here in Essex 🌹

[Neville]

same here....

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Enjoy🌹tomorrow I’ll go watch the sunrise in Maldon at 5 am- so beautiful- before work- make day worthwhile 🌹

[Ghost]

Letting go is hard and setting someone or something free is even more difficult... But along the lines sometimes we must do that even if it means hurting ourselves... Thank you for sharing

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes I agree because we set ourselves free when setting others free and then we can heal and go on instead of being caught up in chains being bound- Thankyou for your wonderful insight🌹

[Ardra]

It reminded of the saying...if you love something set it free....if it comes back it was yours...or else it was never meant to be....
:)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My thoughts exactly- cannot hold what won’t be held and I wouldn’t want something that didn’t want me- in time they will decide..thankyou🌹

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, because sometimes holding on is more painful than letting go.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So true- when we know it’s better to release and we don’t we emprison ourselves- Thankyou for your time🌹

[lightsong]

oh! I understand this, and I know that it's sometimes the best to do, when things are getting worse instead of the better, when we are stuck, without moving on... but I admit it that don't like it :(

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Sometimes it’s what good for us not what we like- life teaches us if we are willing to learn and sadly heartache is part of it but what’s meant to be will be - the spirit being free is a blessing but being bound is death🌹Thankyou for your time and understanding🌹