‘Just A Dream’

Damaged dreams of destiny🌹

‘Just A Dream’

It’s all just
Part of a dream

It seems

Your ‘I wish’
‘I yearn ‘
‘I just might’
‘I dream on it’

That’s where
I belong
In the ‘dream box’

Lost
Without a cost
Only to be found
By the sound of
Your searching
Heart
Only set to depart
From a part
Of your soul
That your thoughts
Only know
And go

Just a dream
A vision
Set in revision
Out of touch
Not important
Enough
To become
Concrete to
Your heart beat

In excitement
It leaps
Using the words
‘ you are mine
To keep’

On and on
My heart weeps
It walks many a
Lonesome street
Strangers it does
Greet
Knowing that it
Will be in the showing up
Of self
Without a doubt

The dream will scream
And shout
And makes its
Presence felt

On it waits
Every thought
It contemplates
Irradicates
The possibility
Of fate

To find your
True soulmate
What will it
Take

Memories
Promises

Fake
Visions
Bringing division
Between
Your hearts
Desires

Dulling the fires

Leaving your
Heart
Rested and tried
Having lost
All of desire

What was it
That you required
To fulfil
The dream

So innocent
Pure
Deserved
And
Serene

That is
Our dream.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
30 April 2018

Reviews

[Neville]

some say that life is but a dream... I dream in colour and oh so vividly .... a poem enjoyed and a dreamy one too.. N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Dreams are to be sought after..,not caught up in lies keeping one tied to the place they put themselves- a dream is all it seems until that destined day where whats neant to be comes to call...thankyou for stopping by🌹

[Neville]

my sincere pleasure as always...

[Fame]

Wow l loove your work.... So easy to relate to and when I go through a poem or a story I want to be able to relate to it and feel the connection......

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m so glad you feel that way Thankyou for taking time🌹

[Traci]

Dreams inspire us. We must follow our hearts to live our dream.
Love your work, words of wisdom, written from the heart and soul, and it's felt.....thank you!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou kind soul and yes when we are wise we recognise that wisdom in others I sense a great deal of spiritual awareness within you- I’m glad u have acquired peace and wisdom - she is the best teacher- blessings🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

The dream of many.
"So innocent
Pure
Deserved
And
Serene "
I need the above words. Some people cannot find this place. Amazing and wonderful use of words and thoughts dear Kelly.
Coyote

That is
Our dream.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh Coyote- if only u follow your heart all things are possible- the mind needs to become quiet so the heart can see- peace is within all of us we need to remove the haziness that’s blocking the view only ourselves can bring change- I pray for you to find what your heart seeks🌹Thankyou for always kind words🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kelly.

[sette]

dreams inspired us to make life happier and easier

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Sometimes people use dreams to cover up three truths- never actually intending on making them come true- all depends on self- Thankyou for taking time 🌹

[sette]

totally true

[Chris Shaw]

Keep dreaming. Never give up on your dreams. Your poem had great flow, danced along nicely and I enjoyed the internal rhyme. Thank you.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad it pleased your heart- thanking you kindly🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"a dream in revision" is better than giving up...maybe we will get a higher grade---i dream of the serene as you express...just some serenity and contentment.
your expression has such great beat to it...the rhyme, the in-rhyme...rolls off the tongue effortlessly.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And I pray you find what you are dreaming of and seeking that all your dreams come true- blessings and thanks to you🌹

[Ghost]

Dreams are nice if they become reality.. But sometimes what our reality is doesn't fit our dreams... But I say never give up on your heart, your reality, your dreams because one day you will wake up and wonder where everything went... Thank you for sharing

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

We need to hold tight to the dreams as who knows if dreams are really dreams and not reality and reality not the dream?? Y do we believe what we have been taught to believe and dreaming is not acceptable?? Thankyou for your time and thoughts I love reading them🌹