‘Confusion’

Lost clarity - out of bounds🌹

‘Confusion’

Confusion
Is
When the mind
Has lost
All track
Of
Time-

When there’s no
Sign of
What’s
Yours or
Mine

When your
Thoughts
Turn
Around
And there’s
No
Balance
Or
Up and
Down

Confusion
Clouds
All sight
Around

The sound
You hear
Is
All but
Clear
And you
Don’t want
Anyone
Near-

But that’s
The biggest
Fear
Losing
What’s
So near...

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
15 January 2010

Reviews

[Traci]

Once again, you entice the reader into a world you have created that is believable, emotional, and full of wisdom that remains long after an initial reading

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh how kind- I try but share my true feelings as life I have experienced- it’s all in trying to make words mean something to someone- grateful for your appreciation🌹

[Traci]

That's what makes your writing so special. Your words are so much more than "just words", they are your heart, soul, life.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your words of kindness - for some they are too honest I guess and they choose not to face the truth it evokes deep within - but like I say it’s not the layout it’s the words and if the words achieve what they are sent out to do then I am more than grateful- Thankyou with a thankful heart🌹

[Adam Adams]

one of my fav. poetry! well honoured with ballistic words. truthful. encapsulated. admirable & quite categorical as well nicely framed 'pon the meanderings of life with "Thoughts In Time" feelings.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou appreciate your thoughts and time taken🌹

[Micah]

I love how you used enjambment to create emphasis. Especially on the lines, "The sound... You hear... is... All but... clear..."

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou- glad you enjoyed it- Thankyou for taking time🌹

[Leo]

Brilliant indeed..couldn't have expressed it better even if I tried..two thumbs way up

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate your time🌹

[lightsong]

yes, the fear to lose Your loved ones whom are around You, whom You can rely on, I think the better is to have some time alone, some solitude and try to meditate until our track is back, that fears is lessen, it will eventually, no matter what, sometime the confusion we have inside us, it's but the reflection to confusion which is all around us in life.

Thank You dear Kelly, for keeping sharing these valuable lessons.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

No Thankyou for always such wonderful words and understanding- we cannot allow ourselves to become part of the confusion- Silence is clarity🌹

[lightsong]

and I can't imagine You but the Clarity of Silence 💖

[Norah]

Fear can be a controlling feeling, but you can always conquer it. I know confusion comes within, but slowly things will become clear.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

True- we can overcome fear- faith and love conquers all- thankyou🌹

[AllauraRose]

Honestly, I’m confused most of the time. I mishear so many things and my friends think I'm crazy for the most part. Life likes to throw curveballs at you and normally you don't understand what is happening but you just have to try to see what is clear, if anything, and then make a solution out of that.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

There is an answer if you look deeper and clarity comes to those who seek- God gives peace- confusion is when there is a state of unbalance and fear at times- we all need to be still at times and follow what makes our heart peaceful and happy- I pray you become more clear away from confusion- Thankyou for your time I appreciate it🌹

[Ghost]

Fear is the one thing that leads to such confusion... I fear running into confusion, which sometimes my illness takes me to but I am fighting to remember, fighting fear before it makes me confused.... Thank you for sharing

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So true and once fear is overcome by faith then you have won the battle- praying for your illness to be recovered- I appreciate your time and words🌹

[Ardra]

The biggest
Fear
Losing
What’s
So near...

so dear things... always calls for fear...but if we conquer the fear with faith n love of not loosing...maybe we will be able to find a balance.... down the lane :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

True wisdom you write hear all about faith over fear - fear is just a way to spur one on as long as they see it as a stepping stone - with faith all is possible- as I so experienced- the balance is another story- tender line between good bad happy sad- balance is the key- Thankyou for your kind words and time 🌹

[Paul Bell]

So true. Never take people for granted.
Cos when they walk away.
They walk away.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

True- but live is a two way street and if you don’t take note of it somewhere there’s going to be a head on collision- give and take understanding communication are all important- distance doesn’t separate- silence does- Thankyou for stopping by I appreciate it🌹

[Paul Bell]

Silence sure kills relationships.