‘Rebirth- From Cleansing To Flourishing Happiness’

A new season has come -Sakura🌹

‘Rebirth-From Cleansing To Flourishing Happiness’

The Ayurveda
Of the source
Of life

Removing you
From forlorn
And strife

Bringing balance
And in the
Hammon
Your sorrows
And woes
Are cleansed

From head to toes

Warm air surrounds
Water washing
Waste away

Black cleansing
Removing any
Yoke

Removing dead cells
And skin
Caught up in
Sin

Returning to
Dao
Ying Yang
Part of the
Plan

Apart from man

Principles of the
Universe
Harmony
For ever a day

Natural order
Without fenced
Boarders

The Tao
Of here
And now

Where riches
And flourishing
Fills us with
Nourishing

Sakura-

Spring has returned
Blossoms of special
Cherry trees

Love in abundance
For you and me
Hearts set free

Renewal
Rebirth
Bonding
Beautiful
Romantic

Cease the moment

Moments
Time is short

Life is taught

Sakura

Starting over
Welcoming season
Of
New beginnings

Hearts murmuring-
‘Season of Sakura
Is here-
Want to go
Hamami?’

In the light
Of the night
Hamami-
You and me
Underneath
The Cherry Blossom
Tree-
Let’s set our
Love free!!’

Kelly Fagelund -Gjersoe
25 April 2018

Reviews

[Neville]

We all need someone and something and this spectacular write is nothing short of a cornucopia overflowing with ideologies & a celebration of popular philosophies....... I bet this took some thinking about.... smashing ........ Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Not at all- I got the different words together and created a poem around it - didn’t even take 10 mins- sometimes I even surprise myself- I’m glad you enjoyed it and I Thankyou for your always kind words and appreciation-I do appreciate🌹

[Neville]

pleasure......

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The blooms of the Cherry Blossom are quite the sight to behold and something I myself would like to witness in my lifetime. Their flourishing does bring happiness in its fleeting glory.

Interesting use of philosophies throughout this poem; the seeking of wisdom and inner peace is a neverending pursuit. Much like happiness should be.

A fine write.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for you kind gentle words- yes it is an ongoing journey but once you have learnt the basic foundations of the essence it’s just the living and trusting within it- but there’s always something to learn- I would never change it for anything- Thankyou for your time I appreciate🌹

[Ardra]

I used to watch a cartoon called card captors ..sakura ... loved them... It used to translated to English or it has English sub titles I think hehe..

That word reminded me the fun times...

Love the poem.. taking care of self first step to healing and finding happiness....when with loved one the joy is double isn't it...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Glad it brought good memories- that’s what life’s made of- thankyou🌹

[lightsong]

water, bubbles, mermaids... now Sakura! I swear dear Kelly there are more of things that we share inside You will keep surprising me with! in fact I was even kind of shocked to first read Your word Sakura when I noticed Your poem.

That's one of Your most amazing and brilliant poems, totally magnificent, outstanding! how You even balanced the healing of oneself and love, how You need to be prepared to love, with healing Your insides, You must start with Your own self, with Your inner, making it better, renew it, when our Love is eternal too, renewed with the Sakura each year, Kelly, You are outdoing here, the many charming characters You have are showing and glowing, from the wise, profound being You are, to the romantically passionate woman You are, the loving, the giver... gorgeous read, splendidly gorgeous.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh beautiful soul you make my heart cry tears of love and appreciation- many thingslie deep with a river of many ages- I’m glad you found consolance in the words- yes it starts within where all is one- searching brings us back to thisvery place- learning all the ways of walking along the way- sharing a common goal- love- live and blessings being sent your way🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and wonderful words shared dear Kelly.
"You and me
Underneath
The Cherry Blossom
Tree-
Let’s set our
Love free!"
I liked the above lines. Cherry Blossoms are blooming soon. First real sign of the warm days coming. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes such beauty and happiness can be found underneath and around- I love to look at the true and the colours of the blossoms- thankyou🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Won't be long Nature will come alive. And you are welcome Kelly.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Sorry was three not true- 🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh dear—tree🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Third time lucky🌹

[sette]

yes every philosophical thought is clearly expressed here from Confucius; harmony to lao tzu's yin yang to the rebirths and cleansing of one soul under the sacred scripture of Hinduism to the beliefs in shintoism, a rare combination of philosophy and religion, this is a very good writing.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I’m glad that you enjoyed it- all in all each part makes us whole and the universe falls into its place- Thankyou for reading🌹