‘Tree In Me’

‘Tree In Me’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Simplicity to be🌹

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‘Tree In Me’

Oh the inner
Longing -

Just to be
Like a tree-

Leaves fluttering
Free-

Flying

Sighing

In the breeze-

Oh the simplicity
Of the tree-

Forever grounded
Never bounded

Roots deep
Downward-

Spirit free

A lesson to be
Learnt
For you
And
Me .

11 April 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! All my life I've chosen places to live with spectacular trees. They are so amazing in all the ways you describe here. I believe we can have friendships with special trees that can teach us in many of the ways you mention (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Oh I’m so glad you love them like I do- I can stand and watch their ways for hours and never cease.. read more
I have always had a fondness for trees. There stoic nature brings out my photographic eye every time.

"forever grounded
never bounded"

...such beautiful, ethereal feeling to this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

I’m glad it touched a tender part of your heart - I love to watch trees and I’d love to be one n.. read more
I like the singular focus and the repeating "e" takes on the gleeful eeee of children, arms wide experiencing the downward plunge of the roll-a-coster from its steepest climb. Its the freeeee feeeeling of beeeing on theee eeedge of flight.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for your time and words I’m glad you experienced the freedom of graceful motion within th.. read more
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I like this idea; one I have written about myself in brief simplicity long ago.

For the tree is ever steadfast, immovable in the face of all the elements and endures as long as its roots sustain it. Something we all would like to be ourselves.

Another fine write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou and yes it’s just amazing that it stands tall and strong not moaning complaining no matte.. read more
"I think that I shall never see a poem as lovely as a Tree..." by Joyce Kilmer...
dear Kelly... A poet as a Tree would be far beyond our dreams... truly, Pat

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Far far away in the land of promises where dreams come true for me and you- Thankyou for always grac.. read more
There is something a tad captivating here....and from a little acorn etc etc......nice words my friend & what a lovely thought too........N

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thanking you within your captivating- I appreciate your words and time🌹
Neville

6 Years Ago

my words and time cost nothing, tis a pleasure......N
Lovely short poem. You captured nature and the imagery of a tree exceptionally well. Good read!

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for your time and appreciation I am grateful🌹
a unique style an expressive content and can relate with life as well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for your time I appreciate it🌹
sette

6 Years Ago

you are welcome
You always amaze me with Your profound meaningful thoughts, I wish I can express my thoughts brilliantly like You do, but I will count on You to do that :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Oh such kindness and you express yourself in many more wonderful ways I wish I could write like you-.. read more
A wonderful poem shared dear Kelly. A tree, a wonder of God. A tree can reach for heaven and touch earth. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Yes isn’t a tree the most wonderfully enchanting thing- I have great respect for a tree- Thankyou .. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Kelly and I agree.

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

Essex, United Kingdom



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