‘Touch Me’

Hands on all over🌹

‘Touch Me’

Touch me
Tender
Sweet surrender
Unforgettable
To remember

Traces and
Trances
Love sweetly
Dances-

Motions and
Potions
Riding
Upon oceans
Where
Currents run
Deep-
Surging
Urging

Trickling traces
Unknown places
My responding
Chills -

Shivers down
My spine
Oh so heavenly
And devine-

Don’t waste time-

Allow yourself
To become mine-

Touch me
Tease me
Do whatever
To please me ..

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
2 April 2018

Reviews

[NEHA]

"Touch me
Tease me"

lately, I found myself trapped in the obsession of these two lines! a magic trickles through your poem..a quite sensual as well as soothing one....

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Why Thankyou and I’m so glad you enjoy these words- beautifully tempting and take you to another place in time🌹

[Resa]

This has a wonderfully beckoning flow.
I absolutely love it !

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate it🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

When love is true. Two people seek perfect place in their arms.
"Touch me
Tease me
Do whatever
To please me"
The above lines. Needed words to know. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes the desires and feelings of the heart need to be expressed physically and openly- no need to hold back or feel insecure in love- that’s where many a mistake is made when people hold back preventing true feelings from showing- Thankyou for your precious time🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kelly. I love your work.

[therealtadkent]

Punchy, sex, effective. The rhyming is effective instead of droning, well done; you're also very good with your emphasis.
Don't be a stranger! I'll review more soon.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate- sometimes life’s just life and become bit distant- but I’m around - 🌹

[Paul Bell]

Nice thread running through this poem.
The final chase leading to that sweet surrender.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou🌹

[Ghost]

A romantic taunt to someone you love reaching out for them.... A sensual write... Thanks for sharing

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Glad you enjoyed it- Thankyou for reading🌹

[Lorry]

When its right, its right and when two people feel that way about each other, then worlds collide and the universe is reborn. Sounds like a good place to be.
Love the passion of your words.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes no better place to be but right there ..I’m glad you enjoy the passion- passion is needed - thankyou🌹

[lightsong]

a poem filled with tenderness and deep passion too, Your poem was like a wave, soft at first, then slowly raising and raising... until it reached the crest moment, which You left it to our imagination at the end :)

This verse from You,

" Motions and
Potions
Riding
Upon oceans
Where
Currents run
Deep-
Surging
Urging "

I like very much, read it few times, it's as if the two bonding swimming with the same wave, and together acting as one, yielding to each feeling and action as one, it holds both the deepest of tenderness and deepest of passion too.

a very lovely poem to read before I sleep, thank You dear Kelly :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And I Thankyou dearest Light - may you sleep sweetly upon waves of softest dreams and be cradled in the precious arms of the angels- love needs to be an acting together and a bonding on all levels- Thankyou for always taking time I deeply appreciate you🌹

[lightsong]

Your beautiful words made me feel I'm a baby girl again ahhhh 💞 yes, dear You, what You say is completely true, and as long as time and life allow, I try to give my best to my dear friends, You "🌹" :)

I will wish You too, the sweetest of dreams, the wondrousest ones, when You will go to sleep today ~~~~

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and sweetest softest dreams sent your way 🌹