‘You Do Me’

The effect of touch and tenderness🌹

‘You Do Me’

Oh -

Mould me
And
Hold me
Love and
Control me

Scold me and
Fold me
Into your arms-

Charm me
Disarm me-

Cuckoo
And
Woo woo
Me-

Seduce me
Let loose me-

Disillusion
A fusion

As two become
One..

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
27 March 2018

Reviews

[wordman]

sounds like a special time to me

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Maybe but more than special Thankyou for sharing and your words I appreciate 🌹

[wordman]

when true love and complete freedom from any inhibitions then you can receive and give pure love

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

The freedom and everythingbthere just waiting upon thevtrue love to arrive- I totally agree Thankyou 🌹

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

“Woo woo Me”- you slayed it Kelly! love it all- picture, title, form, cadence, rhyme, musicality, sensuality, playfulness. This would make a great R&B song- I hear Etta, Ella, (sorry, I’m old!). Perfect.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

No your choice and thoughts perfect - Thankyou - yes sometimes it takes all types of feelings and words leading to so so many actions- Thankyou for your time 🌹

[Anise]

This made me smile. :) Really wonderful flow of words, so beautiful.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou as king as you smiling I appreciate that smile🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Asking as you are smiling- please forgive typing errors 🌹

[Anise]

I am smiling and no forgiveness required. :)
I am the typo QUEEN. Way too often.

[An owl on the moon]

So a beautiful, wild flow of thoughts that carries the soul into the wonder of two becoming one. Extravagant bliss.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou you I appreciate your thoughts🌹

[Chris]

Sensuous pic...

The flow was sweet. The thoughts engendered were endearing and left a smile within.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So glad to have made you smile I was wondering where you had disappeared to- it took seduction to get you to reappear- Thankyou for your visit nice to see you🌹

[Chris]

Hmmm... seduction huh? Chuckling here... I'll remember that.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Chuckle away🌹

[Chris]

Toasty thoughts

[mou]

such a magical rhythm could melt anyone..passionate words make it all
mou.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

But in the touch there are many more words spoken- thankyou🌹

[mou]

you're welcome

[sette]

nice one kelly so sensual and touching... so romantic in each line.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thanking you🌹

[sette]

no problem

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this poem folded me within it.

your rhythm pulls the reader into your world of words.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your time and allowing my words to draw you in- I appreciate🌹

[Haley]

loved it. this poem would actually make a great song i feel!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Always good to feel- sets your spirit free- Thankyou I’m glad u appreciate it🌹

[Ghost]

What a way to want to be seduced... it is a giddy feeling from the heart when you get seduced... Nice write

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou- yes a feeling like no other- Thankyou for stopping by again🌹