‘You Do Me’

The effect of touch and tenderness🌹

‘You Do Me’

Oh -

Mould me
And
Hold me
Love and
Control me

Scold me and
Fold me
Into your arms-

Charm me
Disarm me-

Cuckoo
And
Woo woo
Me-

Seduce me
Let loose me-

Disillusion
A fusion

As two become
One..

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
27 March 2018

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

A very romantic poem of seduction with an aura of
pleasures unfolding. truly, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes so right are you- Thankyou for taking time🌹

[Winslow Des Totes]

The short lines and clipped phrases really added a sense of breathlessness and excitement. Very well written! :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for stopping by- yes intense doesn’t need many words but much action🌹

[Winslow Des Totes]

I very much agree! Have a great day :D

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You too happy easter🌹

[DoormanDan]

Nicely written. I feel like the flow goes away after the "Disarm me" line, but I don't necessarily know if you were going for syllable flow with this piece (it doesn't help that I was just listening to wrap as I was reading this). Regardless, this is a decent piece. :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your time I appreciate it🌹

[θεά]

The ability and power one has on another is incredible. Diffuse and suffuse till two become one. How true and at times tragic.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

True words- but good feelings and connections can’t go wrong- Thankyou for your time🌹

[lightsong]

the power of love, the power of passion that radiate from Your words are magnificent, that is always the specially about Your poems, the power that glows from them unto us...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh Thankyou that’s so kind- I try- love is all and everything in one- lots of love and blessings for you🌹

[KCthelastboyscout]

This sounds like a classic 60's pop song.oldie but goodie.well done

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou glad you resonated with it yes must get into the groove....

[Ardra]

All that I feel like saying when I read it...oooh...what you do to me ...Heheh...
Sensual and playful... :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes- why don’t you do what you do when you do what you do to me and over and over again...Thankyou 🌹

[Mrudula Rani]

Your words bounce and dance off the screen right into the heart. Your poem sounds like a beautiful song.

[Dinesh Kumar]

Nicely written really enjoyed

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad you enjoyed Thankyou for reading🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words. They danced to a perfect ending. The movement of the words were magic and sweet. When two people find same place and need the same things. Fireworks can happen. Thank you deae Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And I’ll invest in those fireworks- so true - when live takes over- Thankyou for reading🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Love not live🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Kelly and you are welcome.