‘Sunset Sunrise’

‘Sunset Sunrise’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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The moon so loved the sun he died each night to let her shine🌹

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Sunset Sunrise:

Just as the sun
Sets
And
Rises

So is my
Love-
Desires
And
Surprises-

Each morning
Anew-
Waiting
Upon the
Presence
Of you-

Oh darling
Heart -
Where is the
Part of the play
That special day-

Risen in splendour-
Or are you the great
Pretender-

Like orange in red
Fire-
My hearts
Only desire
To burn deep
And close-

So quiet and remote-

Sitting high
In the sky
Full strength
Full force fire-

Slowly descending
As time crossing
The mind-
What did she
There find-

Coming to rest
At the end the test-
Did we try our best

Remember
Surrender -
I give you my all
Face down in the
Floor-
Surrender

Defender

Come clean me
Redeem me

Full me with fire
Of love and desire-

To rise again
Begin the cycle
Again-

Love can’t pretend
The heart we defend-

Oh glow oh so bright
Showing all might-

Light the midnight
Path so bright-
Hold your precious
Heart insight -
Give in to the
Fight-
Embrace what’s
Right-

When the suns rays
Remove the thoughts
Gone astray-
The moon shine
Intertwines
The longing
Of the mind-

Set your self free
Where the
Sun and moon
Join
In unity-

A blessing
For you and me ...

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
26 March 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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mou
truly love has pain, sometime gives bliss and two perfect heart find always pleasure from it..so beautiful words of yours that give the mind a peaceful solitude in the crowd of daily life
mou.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou yes we need to find a place for mind to savour the longings of the heart - Thankyou for you.. read more
mou

6 Years Ago

my pleasure
Excellent piece of writing! I could picture Selene (goddess of the moon) driving her chariot across the heavens, with her brother Helios (a handsome young man crowned with the shining aureole of the Sun) following her across the sky each day. But in this version two devoted lovers; made me smile … :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

I’m glad you smile- Thankyou 🌹
Lovely and beautiful Kelly.... ... sometimes love is like that.... burning each other out...till the light of each other is reflected in the soul of the other.... :)


Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

So very true- 🌹thankyou🌹
Even the moon and the sun meet when the eclipse of two hearts.
"Set your self free
Where the
Sun and moon
Join
In unity-
A blessing
For you and me ..."
The above lines I loved and thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing words.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

MY pleasure - there is always hope for two hearts and souls that are meant to be together to find a .. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are right dear Kelly and you are welcome.

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

Essex, United Kingdom



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