‘Bathing Bliss’

Beyond all pleasures...🌹

‘Bathing Bliss’

Bathing
In
Bliss

The oils
Untwist
The muscles
And
Mind

Twisted

In time-

Reverse

Rewind

Reprogram-me

Taking back
What’s mine

Sensual steam
Clouding
A dream

Inhale
Every detail
To the source
No fed force

Oils tampering
With fleshly
Pampering

Coating
Sensual cavities
Extreme bliss
Recovering
Sanity

Exhale
Every unlived
Tale-

Stale energies
Regret unannounced
Channels
Channeling

Rebirth
Balancing

Soft sublime
Oily reflections
Fire luring
Pain curing

Motions murmur

Deep breathing
Revealing
Peace and purpose

Taking time for
What soothes
Your soul-

Oh so heavenly
Connecting
With devinity

Bathing bliss

Not something
Any should
Miss...

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
23 March 2018

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I rarely bathe, but if I could slow down my mind & focus on my sensations the way you do in this poem, maybe I'd find a new appreciation for this method for unwinding. Overall, the flow & rhyme & wordplay of your message resembles the very slow-smooth-relaxing experience that you're describing -- showing instead of telling. I love the way this has a hint of sexuality, still slightly mysterious & some may read it differently, it's so subtle, but other than that, it's all about the mind melt more than the physical (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your wonderful words and yes sensual/ sexual always- even if we just dream- dreams do come true sooner or later- I appreciate your time🌹

[wordman]

it certainly looks inviting,i guess i`m a shower guy,but i love hot tubs,and wine,lol

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lovely and don’t forget the candles 🌹always inviting us an aromatherapy bath🌹

[wordman]

thanks,i forgot the most important part

[Coyote Poetry]

Perfect description of a long and relaxing bath. I believe nice when a woman can find the time to enjoy the time of peace and swim in her thoughts. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Swimming in thoughts indeed- Thankyou 🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to swim in thoughts and you are welcome dear Kelly.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Oooh I’m gonna run me a bubble bath today
Wow love this write

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Enjoy and relax from head to toe🌹

[samparks,sam]

Sure , nice I enjoy it

[Ghost]

Yes a hot bath can feel good on tired aching muscles, or just to warm one up when they are cold... It can even unwind a stressed out soul.. Nice write makes me wish I had a tub instead of a shower...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes indeed- I’m sure you can find somebody who will share their bath with you🌹Thankyou 🌹

[Tony]

Nothing like a hot bath! Nice write

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes and it is oh so delightful- Thankyou for reading🌹