‘Unbelonging Longing’

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‘ Unbelonging Longing’

The inner longing
Without belonging
The
Cry of the heart
Waiting
To return
To the start
Uniting
With the part
Distant
And
Forlorn-

The rising sun
At dawn

New moon

Crescent

Being present

Not of here
But there-

Not a worry
Or a care

Just love
That is shared-
Innocence
Everywhere-

Vibrations echoing

Silent knowings

Sixth sense
Growing

Inner turbulence
Overflowing-

Barriers crumbling
Words mumbling
Footsteps stumbling
Thoughts tumbling

Stars shining

Eyesight blinding

Reflections and
Reminesance
Of this existence-

Rippling waters
Rivers flow

Directions none
Will know-
Only spirit
Will show-

The light it glows
Truth it shows-

Silence set deep
Tears do weep

Connections
Rejections
Selections-

All set in perfection
Of testing transitions

Placing you in position
To
Receive all that
You’ve grieved-

The seasons have shown
Where the heart having
Roamed-

Begged
Borrowed
Moaned

Rebirth
Renewed
Revived
Regained

To that part
From the dark
Into the light
Where spirit
Takes flight...

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
22 March 2018

Reviews

[Lorry]

This is beautifully hopeful, of revisiting those feelings we once shared so openly, until reality kicked it out of us. Of finding that warm, comforting embrace that will mean as much to all involved, with no need for imbalance. We wonder, if….
Love the freefalling flow of your words here, dropping effortlessly, line from line. Perfect ending.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and I’m glad you connected with the lines-🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

The below lines. We will do often in a life.
"Rebirth
Renewed
Revived
Regained "
I loved the journey in the words dear Kelly. Left the reader with places of thoughts and lessons learn. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Many thanks- always good to have thoughts🌹

[emmajoy]

'To that part ~ From the dark ~ Into the light ~ Where spirit ~ Takes flight... ' yes, yes and YES!

Lessons learned, experience one's banner. Carried away on a stream of more than aware glorious surrender, perhaps? Accepting past, learning to move into a place where anything can happen, anything goes, but runs on a drum of utter reverence.. love at its most simple and needed without guilt or regret. Perhaps?

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m smiling from ear to ear with a giggle as well- when we have it we have it and when we understand we are a genius- love the way you say anything can happen anything goes and that’s the most wonderful thing about it expect the unexpected and miracles will appear- Thankyou for your wonderful words and making my heart smile🌹

[emmajoy]

Sharing smiles is wonderful, and, fun, especially on a tired Friday. :)

[AYVID N]

In the stream of thoughts I see the seamless journey a soul takes. Learning, healing, surviving, becoming stronger before flying off into the night.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

There’s a special place within each of us that calls to us and speakstge truth- whether we follow it or not will lead us where we find ourselves- Thankyou for your time and thoughts🌹

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome 🌸

[Patricia Wedel]

We are always reinventing ourselves.... with the sunrise and the crescent moon...
interacting with spirits and nature... like a stream around a bend of new
beginnings. Living tucked in a poem.... embroidered with love. truly, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your words of wisdom🌹

[θεά]

Very dynamic piece of writing. The turns and flow have a riverine rhythym to it which adds to the message of setbacks and subsequent renewal. Beautifully crafted!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your time and special words I appreciate it🌹

[sette]

To that part
From the dark
Into the light
Where spirit
Takes flight... yes because there is hope in everything. nice piece of writing kelly.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate your words🌹

[sette]

you are very much welcome kelly

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as we age, the idea of love changes...
we see it differently...the rose colored glasses break...
but eventually we find reason that works...and an understanding of what real, perpetual love is.

i like this one.

j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I’m glad you like it- love is love you need to feel it out of heart not mind, Thankyou for your words I appreciate it🌹

[Richard McLin]

I love your structure, it's wholly your own, and you are terrific at molding your pieces to your will. This is a great piece that's not just emotional, but makes you search deep down inside of you, and realize that everyone feels this way at a point in their lives, and memories came flooding, of love, loss and all of it. Great job.
-Richard

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Such kindness and understanding- Thankyou for your thoughts I appreciate🌹