‘Daisy Rings’

‘Daisy Rings’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Ring of love and peace🌹

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Daisy

Rings

Gypsies sing

The wind

It knows

My

Name ..

Kelly Fagelund - Gjersoe
22 March 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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I don’t know why, but I pictured you skipping along to this, singing “ la-la- la- laa-la” 
It certainly has a nursery rhyme, innocent feel to the words, freedom that comes from falling into nature’s rhythm.



Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

So beautiful and free- glad you saw happiness for me- thankyou🌹
What a little delight this truly turned out to be...... Smashing.......N

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Daisy’s delight- Thankyou and I’m glad it delighted you🌹
Neville

6 Years Ago

It did indeed.....................Neville
Wow, that's other-worldly...beautiful writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for such kindness I appreciate it🌹
Zoya

6 Years Ago

You're welcome
the sense of peace and connection and magick are loud and clear ... so emotive and so incredibly few words and lines...well done says i.,..i think this is a real gem!
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Your senses do not fail you kind sir- spot on- I’m glad it touched your heart, thanking you🌹
I tried to write one on enchanted rings. Shelved it as I could not create the feeling. You did it so beautifully here...

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Trying to create can never be the same aswhat is- Thankyou for your time, I appreciate it🌹
dear Kelly... The wind... it knows my name... free to sing and dance
in daisy rings... a free spirit to roam at will. An artist with a brush of
nature defined. truly,Pat

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Oh such beauty you present and so true- love ur words🌹thankyou🌹
Love the flow of this. It’s simple and sounds like the line of a song.

I also like the sentiment and really like “the wind/it knows/my/name/“

Definitly enjoy reading it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed it thankyou for taking time🌹
H L Rose

6 Years Ago

Of course!
Very nicely done. Simple and rhythmic.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou I’m glad you enjoyed it🌹
love is free like a gypsy...self-love....contentment.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Yes you are right love is free- thankyou🌹
When the Gypsies know your name. You can be part of the wind song. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

The wind knows..my pleasure- Thankyou for you Coyote🌹
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Kelly.

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Essex, United Kingdom



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