‘Daisy Rings’
A Poem by
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
Ring of love and peace🌹
Daisy
Rings
Gypsies sing
The wind
It knows
My
Name ..
Kelly Fagelund - Gjersoe
22 March 2018
© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
Reviews
I don’t know why, but I pictured you skipping along to this, singing “ la-la- la- laa-la”
It certainly has a nursery rhyme, innocent feel to the words, freedom that comes from falling into nature’s rhythm.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
So beautiful and free- glad you saw happiness for me- thankyou🌹
What a little delight this truly turned out to be...... Smashing.......N
Posted 6 Years Ago
What a little delight this truly turned out to be...... Smashing.......N
6 Years Ago
Daisy’s delight- Thankyou and I’m glad it delighted you🌹
6 Years Ago
It did indeed.....................Neville
Wow, that's other-worldly...beautiful writing!
Posted 6 Years Ago
Wow, that's other-worldly...beautiful writing!
6 Years Ago
Thankyou for such kindness I appreciate it🌹
6 Years Ago
You're welcome
the sense of peace and connection and magick are loud and clear ... so emotive and so incredibly few words and lines...well done says i.,..i think this is a real gem!
E.
Posted 6 Years Ago
the sense of peace and connection and magick are loud and clear ... so emotive and so incredibly few words and lines...well done says i.,..i think this is a real gem!
E.
6 Years Ago
Your senses do not fail you kind sir- spot on- I’m glad it touched your heart, thanking you🌹
I tried to write one on enchanted rings. Shelved it as I could not create the feeling. You did it so beautifully here...
Posted 6 Years Ago
I tried to write one on enchanted rings. Shelved it as I could not create the feeling. You did it so beautifully here...
6 Years Ago
Trying to create can never be the same aswhat is- Thankyou for your time, I appreciate it🌹
dear Kelly... The wind... it knows my name... free to sing and dance
in daisy rings... a free spirit to roam at will. An artist with a brush of
nature defined. truly,Pat
Posted 6 Years Ago
dear Kelly... The wind... it knows my name... free to sing and dance
in daisy rings... a free spirit to roam at will. An artist with a brush of
nature defined. truly,Pat
6 Years Ago
Oh such beauty you present and so true- love ur words🌹thankyou🌹
Love the flow of this. It’s simple and sounds like the line of a song.
I also like the sentiment and really like “the wind/it knows/my/name/“
Definitly enjoy reading it!
Posted 6 Years Ago
Love the flow of this. It’s simple and sounds like the line of a song.
I also like the sentiment and really like “the wind/it knows/my/name/“
Definitly enjoy reading it!
6 Years Ago
So glad you enjoyed it thankyou for taking time🌹
Very nicely done. Simple and rhythmic.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Very nicely done. Simple and rhythmic.
6 Years Ago
Thankyou I’m glad you enjoyed it🌹
love is free like a gypsy...self-love....contentment.
Posted 6 Years Ago
love is free like a gypsy...self-love....contentment.
6 Years Ago
Yes you are right love is free- thankyou🌹
When the Gypsies know your name. You can be part of the wind song. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
When the Gypsies know your name. You can be part of the wind song. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
6 Years Ago
The wind knows..my pleasure- Thankyou for you Coyote🌹
6 Years Ago
You are welcome dear Kelly.
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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹 Essex, United Kingdom
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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time.
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