When your in love (really in love) then you listen deeply to their heart as well as your own.. I knew I was lacking something before... Thank you for sharing this warm eye opening poem... Beautiful write thank you.
Yes my sweet friend, and how originally You've spoken with the loudest sound in Your powerful emotive words, that silence which holds the key of my inner, my essence, of my truth, I can hear my voice from there, and those whom are able to, can hear it too... an amazing little piece.
Concise and vivid...... and it works because of it. It has more impact the way you have structured it . It achieves what its meant to without any unnecessary words... minimalist and good
This is really a deep verse. And this "You" is open to interpretation. Could be One's inner conscience, a lover, the Higher Self or even the Supreme Being. But it is in moments of silence that we attain incorruptible profundity and sublimation. Good piece of work there!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thankyou and yes when you are connected in spirit nothing can come inbetween you, I appreciate your .. read moreThankyou and yes when you are connected in spirit nothing can come inbetween you, I appreciate your time🌹