‘Life’

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'Life'

Life-
Streaks-
Colours
Flutter
By-
No time
To ask
The question-
'Why?'

Motion
Mixing
Scenes-
One into
Another-
Random
Thought
Apart from
What
Were taught-
All different
Hues-
Returning
To the
Blues,
And greens-
Its not
What it
Seemed-
All a
Part of
A
Daydream-

Look closer
To the
Seams-
Life's
Streams
Running,
Into a
Fountain
Of
Youth-
Returning
To the
Now-
Not in
The when
And
How-

In the
Calmness
Of your
Mind,
Its just
Thoughts
Caught in
Time -
A nursery
Rhyme-
Hope
And
Belief
Entertained....

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
7 July 2017

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

This is very nice and the presentation is very original, but the most important aspect, in my opinion, is the message, which is universally applicable. Very well done.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate - yes we are spirit in flesh no matter where we are- 🌹

[The Iron Horseman]

You're welcome.

[RW Erskine]

Nice flow, nice write. A beautiful dance of words

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate it🌹

[.]

Yes, Life streaks. And much too quickly I have discovered. Those colours quickly merge into a kaleidoscope with the quickening pace of time and we do sometimes miss the moments to engage with the colours on their own.

Your poem streaks down the page just as life streaks onwards itself. And if you find that fountain of youth, let me know! I could use a sip from it.

Another generously paced and interesting poem.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh the kindness of your gentle heart- yes there is no stopping only learning to entertain and learn from the many truths we decifer along the way- fountain of youth- for the flesh sadly none but the spirit feasts upon the connection and loyalty to self awareness and growth in heavenly places - many thanks for sharing sharing the echoings of your heart🌹

[Anjali]

Nice! I liked it... Keep writing!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Many thanks- yes I plan too - 🌹

[Anjali]

Good! You're welcome.

[KCthelastboyscout]

An incredible fusion of words and imagery.also a very introspective poem to read and think about afterward

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad it gave you something to reflect on hope u enjoyed it thankyou🌹

[Ayvid N]

Life as an effusion of colurs, picturized by your words so vividly, beautifully. A pleasure to read and ponder.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate your time🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to make wishing well wishes and believe in nursery rhymes. keep us young and hopeful.
"A nursery
Rhyme-
Hope
And
Belief
Entertained"
The above lines. Hopeful and needed. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure glad you enjoyed it and it gave freedom to mind and heart🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kelly.