‘Freedom Of Spirit’

Flowing feelings of ecstasy 🌹

Freedom Of Spirit:

Winds blowing
Where it
Will

Oh

The tender
Thrill

Feel the
Warming

Chill

Take me
Where you
Will

I feel you
Into
The depths
Of my
Soul

Ahhhh
You take
My breath
Away

You
Make my
Soul
Ache for
More

Launch me
From
The seas
Shore

Oh

Give me
More

And more
And more

Each and
Every part

Over and over

Three leaf
Clover

Feel it
Full your
Soul

Don’t let go

I’m yours
Like a puppet
On
A string

The lyrics
That
You sing

You’re
My
Everything

Explode
Within
This
Heavenly
Binding

Spiritual
Blinding

Ecstasy
Climbing

Mountains

Crumbling

Calling

My hearts
Mumbling

My spirit
Tumbling

Vortex

For me and you

All paid back
From
Lue

The promise
Showing
Through

A carousel
Shared
By two

The spirit
Setting free

The love

Of you
And
Me

To the
Place
We’re
Meant

To be

Spirit
Setting
Free.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
15 March 2018

Reviews

[Ardra]

It's like a merry go round your poem...taking the two lovers on a journey so full of finding... knowing and finally understanding .... that they are made to be each other's in a beautiful bliss...amongst the chaos of the universe...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

In the midst of chaos you find peace- thankyou🌹

[.]

I think your subtitle explains it all......for it does read like free flowing feelings of ecstasy.

Again, the free flowing style with overlapping internal rhymes suits the theme of rejoicing in the lap of true love.

Another expressive, heart on the quill, poetic piece. Nicely written.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and yes defiantly heart to quill pity heart cannot take the quill and express what if feels- what amazing words those would be- Thankyou for your visit I appreciate it🌹

[Rusteangi Ruba]

I loved how the words dances.
"A carousel
Shared
By two"
The above lines were my favorite. When the spirit know love first. Heart will follow.
ITS EXACTLY CORRECT ..
THE WAY YOU SKETCH YOUR CREATIVITY IS AWEFULL.
RJ

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate your time🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved how the words dances.
"A carousel
Shared
By two"
The above lines were my favorite. When the spirit know love first. Heart will follow. Thank you Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad you enjoyed it - yes sometimes that’s just the way the words are - if the spirit isn’t intouch with your heart you can never know live, Thankyou 🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Love sorry not live🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Kelly and you are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, there is something very spiritual about sensuality...isn't there?
If the binding is more than just physical...the feeling is indescribable....

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Let’s not go there- for that I kill the bull.. lol..it is like beyond heaven on earth🌹

[AYVID N]

Loved the free flowing form of this poem and the rhyming patterns.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So glad you enjoyed it - thankyou🌹

[.]

Such an engaging piece and free spirited!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad you enjoyed it 🌹Thankyou for taking time🌹

[.]

Your welcome