‘Into You’

Falling love of two🌹

Into You:

Oh -
I wish
To touch
Your face-

For you to take
My breath
Into you-

Falling

Drifting

All of you-

The softness
Of
Your skin

The warmth
Of your breath
Palpitations
On my chest-

You move
Beneath my
Touch
Wanting it
So much-

Your face
It shows
Complete
Pleasure-
Now that
We are
Together-

Like having
Found
Sacred treasure-

Your eyes
Closed
Under
Heavenly
Moans-

I’ve broken
Down the
Shell-
Within so
Much loving
Does dwell-

Into you I creep
Searching out
The deep-
Deepest
Thoughts
Of your soul-
Not having
Allowed any
To go-

You open
Up
Your heart-
Your yearning
Begins
To start -

The falling
Into you -
You falling
Deep and dark-
The heart
It falls apart

Into places
That we seek

Oh so gentle
And unique-
It’s you the
‘We’ did seek

What a delightful
Treat -
I’m falling
At your feet-

Pure pleasure
On the ground-

Lost in love
It’s all around -

Oh the heavenly
Sound -
Of me

Falling

Into you.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
11 March 2018

Reviews

[θεά]

This is beautiful. Feels like the flow of water, it is falling and the movement is continuous, not defying gravity but complementing it. You've captured the falling in to love very well. Well done.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou so much- yes love needs to cascade like a waterfall leading two hearts into a pool of pure delight and ecstasy- oh the feeling - Thankyou for reading I appreciate it🌹

[θεά ]

I am glad!

[Tate Morgan]

Love is a special thing for sure. We always think the one we are with will turn out to be our last. Only time will tell. It is only in the maturing of a love that we find peace.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Just life a fine wine as it matures it becomes smother and deeper and soft to the taste- Thankyou for taking time I appreciate it🌹

[.]

A very romantic write....

The flow of words down the page seems to give off a kind of breathless intensity that suits the theme and idea of falling into someone. The reality is we do fall in, and sometimes we fall out.

Free falling and full of romance. Nicely written.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I never want to ever be in a situation again where I fall out when I fall in it will be forever- you see people tend to love these days and not be in love there’s a difference- you cannot fall out if you were never in- Thankyou for your visit and words of wisdom I appreciate 🌹

[Thepensiveplayer]

Once again you do a wonderful job of showing the feelings of the heart in this poem. We can't help but think about the precious moments we have with the person we're longing for. Those moments bring out the deepest expressions of our spirit imaginable. Excellent read! Take care and keep writing. :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your wonderful and kind words- yes I write out of the truth of my heart and spirit for that soulmate that I’m still to meet- Thankyou for taking time 🌹

[MsJewel]

Your words are so lovely...and the ending is perfect. It is a pleasure to read such beautiful poetry :) Julie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your kindness.. glad you enjoy it🌹

[Chris]

G'morning from here. I like the emotional draw and wandering the dream.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Good morning and I’m so glad you enjoy it🌹

[An owl on the moon]

The words and flow of feelings move so tenderly, line by line into the radiance of this love unveiled. So deep and beautiful is a love like this, filling every space of our souls. May it ever be.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

For ever and ever more🌹Thankyou 🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

To fall in love. When life is perfect and we are flowing on air.
Pure pleasure
On the ground-
Lost in love
It’s all around"
To be lost in a love. Perfect place to know. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes when love is perfect there’s no better place to be but right there caught up in the middle of it, thankyou🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I know dear Kelly and you are welcome.

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yes the falling ..your poem re-awakened that first love ..all the longing and sensing into self and another ...i vividly remember how i so embraced just breathing in the breath of my lover ...i'm an old man now but my heart is still young ;) very much blessed by the memories your poem has brought to me this morning ..
E.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad I can be a blessing bringer who could ask for more I do believe you never lose the ability to feel and remember true love- never know what tomorrow brings no matter the age it’s just a number🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

:)......................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the treasure of pleasure between two, me and you. Yes, that is sacred, when we can fall delightfully without reservation...
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I do agree- Thankyou for taking time to read and comment- 🌹