‘Window Of Time’

Passing picture of thoughts moving through time 🌹

‘Window Of Time’

As time,
Its stationed
But passing,
By glancing out
The window pane-
I look and
See-
' What's there to gain?'
The seasons
And the
Falling rain.

Its plain
And
Simple,
Set in
Stone-
With all
The answers
Yet
Unknown.

In time,
A tale
It will unravel,
Through trials
And tests,
Searching
Deep rest-
For a space
In time,
Where out
Of devine intervention,
We will see
The Godly
Intentions,

The test
Of the
Flesh,
Locked up
In time-
Reveals in
The end,
Its only a mime,
Regulated
By the
Tick tock,
In time....

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
8 March 2017

Reviews

[Thepensiveplayer]

An amazing poem here. We never know the true results of our time in this world, but we have to make every moment count. We don't know the number of trials we'll have or how hard they'll be. Yet, I think they're more great things in your life to see. Nice work! Take care and keep writing. :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Life is full of surprises but each one must be felt out of the heart and spirit- Thankyou again, I appreciate your time🌹

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Window of time....yes, that is all we have to live our life.

Our journey is not finite; as the hands of our life clock ticks away we must live and learn, face our trials and fall or overcome them. For our journey is always full of mystery and surprise and the journey beyond our existence even more so.

A very philosophical piece, nicely written and expressed. Well Done.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou kindly- if we only new what the future had in store but then again it wouldn’t be so mysterious and wonderful when dreams come true and faith is fulfilled - it balances eachother out..Thankyou for your time🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even if we did things we regret...they are all part of the learning process...and of who we are today...so we need to accept that....and live with the person we are now...

j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Very true , Thankyou for your kind words🌹

[McEltic]

All we have on our plates this day are memories which used to be dreams... Dream well :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You are correct and we live and learn but life remains a mystery , Thankyou for your time🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is wonder and mystery. If some asked me 40 years ago. Where would you be in 40 years? I wouldn't think I landed where I did. Time, need of the heart and the need of the flesh. Things we decide. Wrong or right. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

True words - as long as we live and learn there should be no regrets - life is a mystery that I don’t know if we’ll ever understand- need to trust the process and let it happen as it should 🌹 Thankyou 🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and we must pray for a nice ending.

[Cadel]

I really enjoyed this.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad you enjoyed it Thankyou for your time🌹