‘D Day’

'D Day'

The words have
Been said, the truth's
Revealed -
The heart
Doth hold
No lies-

The time has
Come for the
Final gun
To be sounded-

D Days time
Is here-
The line been
Crossed many
A time-
And the hearts
Going to
Now yearn
For its loss
So dear...

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe

11April 2017

Reviews

[Traci]

Very profound and powerful. I felt a real sense of sadness as truth be told, closure is sought.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So true- yes it was in an instant and it was done - sometimes better that way- Thankyou for always understanding🌹

[barleygirl]

I love the way your main message is elusive . . . it could be a demise that happens in a number of different directions. I love the way you use the title, which refers to a famous war battle, to symbolize a battle that's raging inside this narrator's heart. Mostly, I love the way each line feels like a sad pronouncement of finality, supporting your overall suggestions of what's about to happen here, but still maintaining an elusive sensation shrouded in mystery (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your generous review and understanding- yes when it’s final there’s nothing left to be said only felt and expressed.. Thankyou again for your time I appreciate your visit🌹

[Lavi]

I'll admit my heart skipped a beat from the first stanza. Such a powerful write and even powerful message. Very nice write.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

As long as no as your heart skips and beats I’m glad - many thanks for kindness🌹

[Lavi]

Anytime, the heartbeat is one of my favorite things to listen to ^^

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And the best🌹

[Richard McLin]

The time has
Come for the
Final gun
To be sounded-

Such a great piece, well written, and packs a punch, an emotional one. I read this one a few times, and each time it made an impact. Great job, added to favorites.
-Richard

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So kind of you I really appreciate your honesty and feedback , I’m glad you enjoyed it🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

When the final guns are done. What is the leftover? When deciding winner and loser. No-one truly can win. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

If love is true both win and the score is even nothing to compete with - true love is a balance like no other🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Love shouldn't never be war. Should be the best days of our life.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

once certain words have been said...the war is over and it is time to move on...
to live again...truth does set us free...
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Indeed it does- sadly some people hold themselves captive in the mind can’t see past the pain hurt lies etc- moving on much better- always something better on its way, Thankyou for taking time I really appreciate it🌹

[lightsong]

This is so profound my friend, I also thought of it as "Death Day", and how Your words can apply to us all... very touching, some of Your expressions are really moving and like always, powerful.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou much love 🌹

[Lorry]

D days can also turn into new beginnings, as well as days of out with the old.
I really like the no lies part. I think when the air has been cleared and truth told, then what occurs from that is what should be, for good and for bad.
With honesty, comes first sight of the complete picture of what you have, or had.
Good luck either way.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Truth is the only way 🌹Thankyou for your time 🌹