dear Kelly... a Mermaid is very Brave to risk her existence with pleas of lost at sea. She is an integral part of dreams and poetry. She has given many a sailor the adventure of love that will give him courage to begin a family. We mortals dream of sleeping in the sea with beautiful voyages under the ocean deep. Your poetry gives us the respite of tranquility. truly, Pat
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
What kind and wonderful words Thankyou so much for your time, I do appreciate it - oh to be free lik.. read moreWhat kind and wonderful words Thankyou so much for your time, I do appreciate it - oh to be free like the sea- 🌹
Well crafted imagery with strong rhyme & rhythm, describing in a palpable way how it can feel when we surrender to the tumbling sensations of needing another person. Excellent use of extended metaphor with strong word & phrase choices to carry the "ocean" theme thru-out. Perfect blend of conveying the tumble of waves, while also suggesting the tumble of being crazy in love (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thankyou for sharing your feelings and thoughts I appreciate your review and time🌹
There is a magical innocence about this one. The thought of a mermaid being rescued by her love is just so sweet. Lydi**
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thankyou I appreciate your time - sometimes we need to be a mermaid in order to find our true love�.. read moreThankyou I appreciate your time - sometimes we need to be a mermaid in order to find our true love🌹
"The mermaid in me" flows like a love song. Wonderful images you paint in the mermaid 's plea. You brought Hans Christian Andersen's Little Mermaid to my mind. Beautiful writing!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
How kind of you.. Thankyou, I’m glad it touched your senses🌹
Many kind of battles. This one was epic.
"Save me
From this sea -
Caress me upon
The shores
Of life-"
The sea is tempting and the wild ride is needed for us to learn. One more day mean another chance to do some good and find some peace. Thank you Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Within the chaos of life and love we find the quiet calm- Thankyou for your time I appreciate 🌹
6 Years Ago
Always my pleasure dear Kelly and you are welcome.
most definitely we need a compass...when we are hopelessly in love with someone who just refuses to Captain our ship...or with someone we want to trust but have no reassurance and just can't--
it is like wave after wave of uneasiness...
j.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Yes you are so right but balance is found within the good and bad if the love being lived- Thankyou .. read moreYes you are so right but balance is found within the good and bad if the love being lived- Thankyou for your time 🌹
I didn't tell You, didn't I? that when I was little I BELIEVED that in some previous life I was mermaid, so You can imagine how Your poem touch me.
The Mermaid in You, that part inside You, of sacrifice, of giving all You can for Your love, still dreaming, achingly dreaming for her prince to free her, fly her over the green grass, oh! You brought so many pure and sweet childhood memories…
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Oh sweet soul much love to the always, be kind to yourself🌹
dear Kelly... a Mermaid is very Brave to risk her existence with pleas of lost at sea. She is an integral part of dreams and poetry. She has given many a sailor the adventure of love that will give him courage to begin a family. We mortals dream of sleeping in the sea with beautiful voyages under the ocean deep. Your poetry gives us the respite of tranquility. truly, Pat
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
What kind and wonderful words Thankyou so much for your time, I do appreciate it - oh to be free lik.. read moreWhat kind and wonderful words Thankyou so much for your time, I do appreciate it - oh to be free like the sea- 🌹
Kelly - I too was born and raised down the shore. So use to the pounding
surf, the riplets of water washing across my feet. Walking the sand with the
one you love holding them close enough that feeling the beating of their heart
is not unlike the roar of the sea.
Its' so easy to get lost in the rhythm of the sea, wanting, needing the gentle
caress and being able to withstand the seas' onslaught.
Very nicely expressed Kelly - take care - Dave
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Yes the wonders of the sea such beauty - always a place to return to - many thanks and you take care.. read moreYes the wonders of the sea such beauty - always a place to return to - many thanks and you take care , I appreciate you taking time 🌹