‘Bliss Unknown’

Beauty of truths to be found🌹

‘Bliss Unknown’

As I lie here
In this bath
Of bliss

The heat it overwhelms

The climbing
Temperature
Of truth
The dive within
The tide

No use you try
And hide
For secrets
To be revealed

Will show themselves
And openly
Recite
Each word

Of

Joy

And within
The splendour
Each heart
Tender
Is torn to
Tear the barest
Part

The dart the
Bull does ring
Of rippling
Watts of woe

It’s all in the letting go

Oh beauty of such bliss

Sets hearts above

And dreams
And love
All share a common
Trait

Do not be late

The time it’s set
For trial and test
Alone we sit and
Wait

For borrowed bliss
A bath to
Bathe
The heart
Is not a game
To be played

The soul it
Mirrors the bliss
Unborn
The mind just
A playground
Waiting to be
Found

It longs to find
It’s place
It holds the bliss
Inside your grasp
But the grip
Not set to last

For bliss tis
Not a passing
Thought or
Pain

It’s beauty full
Of beckoning
Promises
Where bounties
Are set to climb
Enclosing thoughts
And time

Oh beauty of the
Nursery rhyme
That’s stood
The test of time

Oh beautiful
Bliss
Of mine.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
26 February 2018

Reviews

[Ty]

'It longs to find, It’s place, It holds the bliss , Inside your grasp , But the grip, Not set to last.' if any reader were not opined prior. They certainly are now. Great write.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Many thanks I appreciate your time 🌹

[MsJewel]

So beautiful and a pleasure to read :) Julie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I’m glad you enjoyed it🌹

[wordman]

if life was full of happiness and bliss would we want more

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Everything is still not enough- there is so much more to discover🌹

[Simone Davis]

Lovely write beautiful use of imergy provoking thoughts within

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for taking time🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

nice read for me...love the form and scattered rhyme ..i like that in free verse ...your poem unsettles my settle comfort in love and joy and my favorite soaking bath ;) the more you speak of just out of reach and challenges me old bones to get up, wake up,,,there's more ..there is bliss to be had ;) dear Thoughts ..it may be too late for me ;( i am far gone in the realm of contented :))))) love your poem .. love the movement, and theme ..visuals and scenes come easily to me noodle
E.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

No no no never to late- stay up embrace and learn a new dance, love is always waiting wanting just a grasp away🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...... yes ... it is isn't it :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Reach for it you just never know..never stop believing🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful poetry dear Kelly. We need to swim in bliss and never lose of the dream of perfect places and love.
"Oh beautiful
Bliss
Of mine. "
I do like the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou again Coyote for your insight- yes it is heavenly bliss and one day it will be mine🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I have a wise teacher and you are welcome dear Kelly.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure always🌹

[Zara S]

I've read all of your poems and they're absolutely beautiful.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh that’s so lovely thankyou so very much for your time and effort it means the world to me🌹

[Zara S]

You have such great talent, its my pleasure 💞

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou - I wouldn’t quite say that but I try I write out of my heart.. do you have poems I can read I don’t see any?

[Zara S]

Actually I am not much of a poem writer and I usually just write small paragraphs about my feelings and I like to keep it personal, I'm here so I could read others' poems and so far they're beautiful